In numerous countries across the world, the crime is increasing and the its nature is becoming more violent. In this essay, I will try to figure out the potential reasons of these activities and also the measures that can be taken to fight or at least reduce such incidents.
Emphatically speaking, it is true that the crime rate has gone up, along with the severity and violence level in recent years. There are many cases reported on theft, snatching, rape, murders to name a few. There could be several causes for this and I believe the main reason is the arbitrary hike in the inflation rate, specifically in the developing countries. Other reasons behind this could be a high illiteracy ratio, poverty, low self-esteem, alcohol and drug abuse or even the circumstances in which a person is born and brought up.
In order to reduce this, first the government has to step up and introduce new employment policies for people in all households falling under low income group or even lower middle class group for that matter. Government should facilitate Educational services at no cost to such population without any compromise on the quality in order to bring up the literacy ratio. There is also an alarming requirement of NGO's and re-habilitation centres for the needful ones. The law should also set harsh punishments against criminals who commit such brutal misconducts and set an example once and for all. The people must be feared of the consequences before having such a dreadful thought.
To conclude, the actions mentioned above could help us reduce the crime rate up to an unbelievable extent and help us and our people live a safe and healthy life. 
In numerous countries across the world, the crime is increasing and  
the its nature
 is becoming more violent. In this essay, I will try to figure out the potential reasons of these activities and  
also
 the measures that can  
be taken
 to fight or at least  
reduce
 such incidents. 
Emphatically
 speaking, it is true that the crime rate has gone up, along with the severity and violence level in recent years. There are  
many
 cases reported on theft, snatching, rape, murders to name a few. There could be several causes for this and I believe the main reason is the arbitrary hike in the inflation rate,  
specifically
 in the  
developing countries
. Other reasons behind this could be a high illiteracy ratio, poverty, low self-esteem, alcohol and drug abuse or even the circumstances in which a person  
is born
 and brought up.
In order to  
reduce
 this,  
first
 the  
government
  has to
 step up and introduce new employment policies for  
people
 in all households falling under low income group or even lower middle  
class
 group for that matter.  
Government
 should facilitate Educational services at no cost to such population without any compromise on the quality in order to bring up the literacy ratio. There is  
also
 an alarming requirement of NGO's and  
re-habilitation
  centres
 for the needful ones. The law should  
also
 set harsh punishments against criminals who commit such brutal misconducts and set an example once and for all. The  
people
  must
  be feared
 of the consequences  
before
 having such a dreadful  
thought
. 
To conclude
, the actions mentioned above could  
help
 us  
reduce
 the crime rate up to an unbelievable extent and  
help
 us and our  
people
  live
 a safe and healthy life. 
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