Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.311
Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 311
Nowadays, people like to travel, especially abroad, I think that, they want to explore other cultures and see how the other nations look like, during travelling to another country, they will get a new experience and knowledge, which will put in them an advantage over the others.
In the past, particularly, before using the internet it is very hard to see the beautiful nature of other countries and their habit. It was only by word of mouth, such as if someone travelled to a specific place, he would tell about it, but we were not able to see how other people live, the style of their building, their continental food and their way of thinking. On the contrast, after the invention of the internet, we can see the tourist attractions of specific country which make us more ambitious go there to see these milestones. For instance, one of my colleagues travelled to another nation and when he came back, he showed us the memories that he had during the journey.
Moreover, travelling has a lot of benefits to people who travel. Like, meeting with new people who are different from the nation where they lived, also, they will increase their historical information about the country that they decide to travel to, either by reading books about this topic, or through their tour guide during the trip. Furthermore, the big advantage for travellers is that, they will learn a new language to make it easy to communicate with local residents during renting an apartment, or even during buying a memorable souvenir.
To summarize, travelling increased during the last decades, because of the opened media and advertisements which increase the passion of people to explore the other cities and nations, also to be beneficial from that trip.
Nowadays,
people
like to travel,
especially
abroad, I
think
that, they want to explore
other
cultures and
see
how the
other
nations
look like, during travelling to another
country
, they will
get
a new experience and knowledge, which will put in them an advantage over the others.
In the past,
particularly
,
before
using the internet it is
very
hard
to
see
the
beautiful
nature of
other
countries
and their habit. It was
only
by word of mouth, such as if someone travelled to a specific place, he would
tell
about it,
but
we were not able to
see
how
other
people
live
, the style of their building, their continental food and their way of thinking. On the contrast, after the invention of the internet, we can
see
the tourist attractions of specific
country
which
make
us more ambitious go there to
see
these milestones.
For instance
, one of my colleagues travelled to another
nation
and when he came back, he
showed
us the memories that he had during the journey.
Moreover
, travelling has
a lot of
benefits to
people
who travel. Like, meeting with new
people
who are
different
from the
nation
where they
lived
,
also
, they will increase their historical information about the
country
that they decide to travel to, either by reading books about this topic, or through their tour guide during the trip.
Furthermore
, the
big
advantage for
travellers
is that, they will learn a new language to
make
it easy to communicate with local residents during renting an apartment, or even during buying a memorable souvenir.
To summarize
, travelling increased during the last decades,
because
of the opened media and advertisements which increase the passion of
people
to explore the
other
cities and
nations
,
also
to be beneficial from that trip.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes