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Narrator Now listen to a conversation between two students on campus. Male student Hi. . . good morning. Could you help me with something? Female student Um. Maybe. What’s up? Male student Well, I’m a first-year student. Female student Everything going O v. 1

Universities are essential in the life of most people today. It helps us learn about a lot of interesting things as well as securing a good career for us. Nowadays, universities have many healthy and educational activities and facilities. This essay will explore why universities must fund its sports facilities the same as they do in their libraries. First, there aren’t many sports activities in universities. There should be more competitive activities like tennis, swimming and horse riding. These types of sports may seem expensive, but they are indeed important because they keep students fit and healthy. Traditional sports camps like football, baseball or basketball are not enough. At my hometown’s university, for example, has only a football camp. Second, sports activities help students to relax after studying. A good amount of play is not only good physically, but also mentally. After long hours of lectures, students would be tired, and some play would help to relieve the stress of study. Besides, when students relax this way, they have better chances of studying better because a lot of continuing studies will certainly make students bored. In conclusion, I find that it’s really important for universities to give the same money and support to sports facilities and activities as they would give to the libraries for several reasons. These reasons include that there aren’t many sports activities and sport, helping students to relax and finally that there should always be some balance in the funding of different facilities.

IELTS essay Narrator Now listen to a conversation between two students on campus. Male student Hi. . . good morning. Could you help me with something? Female student Um. Maybe. What’s up? Male student Well, I’m a first-year student. Female student Everything going O v.1

Universities
are essential in the life of most
people
today
. It
helps
us learn about
a lot of
interesting things
as well
as securing a
good
career for us. Nowadays,
universities
have
many
healthy and educational
activities
and facilities. This essay will explore why
universities
must
fund its
sports
facilities the same as they do in their libraries.

First
, there aren’t
many
sports
activities
in
universities
. There should be more competitive
activities
like tennis, swimming and horse riding. These types of
sports
may seem expensive,
but
they are
indeed
important
because
they
keep
students
fit and healthy. Traditional
sports
camps like football, baseball or basketball are not
enough
. At my hometown’s
university
,
for example
, has
only
a football camp.

Second,
sports
activities
help
students
to relax after studying. A
good
amount of play is not
only
good
physically
,
but
also
mentally. After long hours of lectures,
students
would
be tired
, and
some
play would
help
to relieve the
stress
of study.
Besides
, when
students
relax this way, they have better chances of studying better
because
a lot of
continuing studies will
certainly
make
students
bored.

In conclusion
, I find that it’s
really
important
for
universities
to give the same money and support to
sports
facilities and
activities
as they would give to the libraries for several reasons. These reasons include that there aren’t
many
sports
activities
and
sport
, helping
students
to relax and
finally
that there should always be
some
balance in the funding of
different
facilities.
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