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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When teacher assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. v.306

When teacher assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. v. 306
With the intervention of new technologies, people have a plethora of options to interact with their near and dear ones using social sites and chat groups. These options are very easy to utilize and saves the valuable time. Both options have positive and negative points. But, excess use of anything is not so good. To start with, nowadays people are so hasty schedule. They do not have much time to travel. Thus, social chat groups are the best way to communicate with close ones. Besides, this is helpful to save the money and the precious time. For instance, one person leaves in the USA and other stays in India. They both can ask about their well wishings on social groups at any time. If they will use video chat option, then they can also see to each other without no cost. This assists them to make strong relationships. Furthermore, due to advancement in social modes of communication, the risk to disclose the privacy has also increased. Like, cybercrime cases are increasing day by day. For example, while video chatting in these social sites, the one needs to fill the personal details. These personal details can be accessed by any fictitious individual. So, it has an adverse effect. To conclude with, there are benefits and drawbacks from both making friends online and offline. The use of social sites to communicate is not bad. But, that should be for certain limit. Social site users should be aware of such kind of cyber crimes and should not disclose their personal information fully. However, in my view, an honest relationship that can be gained from real-world socialization is more significant.
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to interact with their near and dear
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ones
using
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social
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sites
and chat groups. These
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very
easy to utilize and saves the valuable
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time
. Both
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options
have
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positive
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points.
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with, nowadays
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hasty schedule. They do not have much
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time
to travel.
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,
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social
chat groups are the best way to communicate with close
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ones
.
Besides
, this is helpful to save the money and the precious
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time
.
For instance
, one person
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leaves
in the USA and other stays in India. They both can ask about their well
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wishings on
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groups at any
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. If they will
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video chat
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, then they can
also
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see
to each other without no cost. This assists them to
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make
strong relationships.

Furthermore
, due to advancement in
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social
modes of communication, the
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risk
to disclose the privacy has
also
increased. Like, cybercrime cases are increasing day by day.
For example
, while video chatting in these
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social
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sites
, the one needs to fill the personal
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details
. These personal
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details
can
be accessed
by any fictitious individual.
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So
, it has an adverse effect.

To conclude
with, there are benefits and drawbacks from both making friends online and offline. The
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use
of
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social
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sites
to communicate is not
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bad
.
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But
, that should be for certain limit.
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Social
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site
users should be aware of such kind of cyber crimes and should not disclose their personal information
fully
.
However
, in my view, an honest relationship that can
be gained
from real-world socialization is more significant.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay When teacher assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. v. 306

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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