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Describe a language other than English that you would like to learn. You should say: - what the language is- where it is spoken- what you think would be difficult- what would be easy about learning the languageand explain why you would like to learn it. v.1

Describe a language other than English that you would like to learn. You should say: - what the language is- where it is spoken- what you think would be difficult- what would be easy about learning the languageand explain why you would like to learn it. v. 1
In the modern era, the internet has become part of our life and jobs which are dependent on the internet can be done from anywhere, thus, it has enabled companies to provide an opportunity for their employees, with a stable internet connection and a computer, to work from home. This is called telecommuting and has become very popular. This essay will discuss the benefits and also the drawbacks of this development. There are numerous advantages to do work from home. Firstly, it saves a lot of time of the employee, as they don't need to travel to the office. In Noida, for instance, many IT companies offer work from home to their workers and as a result, the traffic jam problem has been solved to some extent. Secondly, on the employer perspective, they don't need any building for their office. We all know that land prices are exorbitant and therefore, it saves a lot of money and that money can be used for business expansion. For example, rent in Mumbai has fallen drastically because the owners of the companies prefer to give work from home opportunity to their employees. Overall, telecommuting is both efficient and broad. Like every coin has two sides, there are disadvantages also. Supervision of the employee would be one of the main issues. It will be burdensome for the management to check how much time the employee had worked. For telecommuting, a person needs some separate space in the house to do the office work, Other family members may create a disturbance, especially small children. As a result, it would be very troublesome for the employee to concentrate on the work. In short, many drawbacks are associated with telecommuting. To conclude, This essay discussed both the advantages and the disadvantages of work from home. While the benefits are enormous, the drawbacks should not be overlooked.
In the modern era, the internet has become part of our life and jobs which are dependent on the internet can
be done
from anywhere,
thus
, it has enabled
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
to provide an opportunity for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
, with a stable internet connection and a computer, to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home. This
is called
telecommuting and has become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular. This essay will discuss the benefits and
also
the drawbacks of this development.

There are numerous advantages to do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home.
Firstly
, it saves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
, as they don't need to travel to the office. In Noida,
for instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
IT
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
offer
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work
from home to their workers and
as a result
, the traffic jam problem has
been solved
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extent.
Secondly
, on the employer perspective, they don't need any building for their office. We all know that land prices are exorbitant and
therefore
, it saves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
money and that money can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for business expansion.
For example
, rent in Mumbai has fallen
drastically
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the owners of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
prefer to give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home opportunity to their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
.
Overall
, telecommuting is both efficient and broad.

Like every coin has two sides, there are disadvantages
also
. Supervision of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
would be one of the main issues. It will be burdensome for the management to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
how much time the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
had worked. For telecommuting, a person needs
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
separate space in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to do the office
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, Other family members may create a disturbance,
especially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
children.
As a result
, it would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
troublesome for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
to concentrate on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. In short,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
drawbacks
are associated
with telecommuting.

To conclude
, This essay discussed both the advantages and the disadvantages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home. While the benefits are enormous, the drawbacks should not
be overlooked
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe a language other than English that you would like to learn. You should say: - what the language is- where it is spoken- what you think would be difficult- what would be easy about learning the languageand explain why you would like to learn it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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