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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.196

Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 196
Visiting distant natural environment, such as the South Pole, is becoming a readily available option nowadays for scientists and tourists. While discovering these incredibly authentic areas is a major advantage of this development, disturbing rare animals and polluting their natural habitat is the main disadvantage. In fact, it's really interesting to explore remote parts of the universe where ecologists find out more about distinctive types of creatures that are subjected to extinction. Moreover, it could be used as an exciting destination to people from all over the world. For example, the polar bear is an extremely rare animal whose visit is believed to be an amazing experience. Therefore, ecologists and tourists always care to travel to such remote regions. On the contrary, animals, living there, are not accustomed to being seen by people and they usually get scared and hide. Furthermore, these lands become polluted because people reaching them tend to throw plastic cans and they only care about enjoying themselves. For example, in 2009, 10, 000 plastic bottles were found to be thrown into the oceans reaching them from the shore. Another example is the white whale which is being killed during some similar but illegal explorations. It is for these reasons, the consequences of such trips are not always good. In conclusion, it's no longer impossible for people to travel to far habitats in nature for either scientific or relaxation purposes. Although, it's a different and also a special experience, it might not be the same for its inhabitants.
Visiting distant natural environment, such as the South Pole, is becoming a
readily
available option nowadays for scientists and tourists. While discovering these
incredibly
authentic areas is a major advantage of this development, disturbing rare animals and polluting their natural habitat is the main disadvantage.

In fact, it's
really interesting
to explore remote parts of the universe where ecologists find out more about distinctive types of creatures that
are subjected
to extinction.
Moreover
, it could be
used
as an exciting destination to
people
from all over the world.
For example
, the polar bear is an
extremely
rare animal whose visit
is believed
to be an amazing experience.
Therefore
, ecologists and tourists always care to travel to such remote regions.

On the contrary
, animals, living there, are not accustomed to being
seen
by
people and
they
usually
get
scared and
hide
.
Furthermore
, these lands become polluted
because
people
reaching them tend to throw plastic
cans and
they
only
care about enjoying themselves.
For example
, in 2009, 10, 000 plastic bottles
were found
to
be thrown
into the oceans reaching them from the shore. Another example is the white whale which is
being killed
during
some
similar
but
illegal explorations. It is for these reasons, the consequences of such trips are not always
good
.

In conclusion
, it's no longer impossible for
people
to travel to far habitats in nature for either scientific or relaxation purposes. Although, it's a
different
and
also
a special experience, it might not be the same for its inhabitants.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 196

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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