It is true that currently the inhabitants of some countries are more young mature people than the older ones.
While there are some serious negative consequences of this increment, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are some aspect of this increment of the young population that can cause some concern. First of all, there would be an increase of unemployment, which relates to the number of young people present in a determined area. For example, in Japan, more specifically in Tokyo, there are a large number of young people who immigrated here from the countryside, this means that there would be a high competitiveness and, as a result, the places of work would be limited and available only for those have a high background standard. Furthermore, this increase may affect the younger peoples mind set and rise the stress and, consequently, and increment of some disease such as depression.
On the other hand, despite such grave issues, some advantages must be considered before giving a hasty opinion. Firstly, with a higher number of young people than older people, the government can provide the latters the pension thanks to the young citizen's contribution. In fact, elderly people can live peacefully without any concern about their pension since it is supported by the taxes paid by the younger. Secondly, a large number of adults can contribute a high availability of labour force, which can increase a country's economy significantly.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of this phenomenon are greater than the drawbacks, serious though there are.
It is true that
currently
the inhabitants of
some
countries are more
young
mature
people
than the older ones.
While there are
some
serious
negative
consequences of this increment, I would argue that these
are outweighed
by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are
some
aspect
of this increment of the
young
population that can cause
some
concern.
First of all
, there would be an increase of unemployment, which relates to the
number
of
young
people
present in a determined area.
For example
, in Japan, more
specifically
in Tokyo, there are a large
number
of
young
people
who immigrated here from the countryside, this means that there would be a high competitiveness and,
as a result
, the places of work would
be limited
and available
only
for those have a high background standard.
Furthermore
, this increase may affect the younger
peoples
mind set and rise the
stress
and,
consequently
, and increment of
some
disease such as depression.
On the other hand
, despite such grave issues,
some
advantages
must
be considered
before
giving a hasty opinion.
Firstly
, with a higher
number
of
young
people
than older
people
, the
government
can provide the
latters
the pension thanks to the
young
citizen's contribution. In fact, elderly
people
can
live
peacefully
without any concern about their pension since it
is supported
by the taxes paid by the younger.
Secondly
, a large
number
of adults can contribute a high availability of
labour
force, which can increase a country's economy
significantly
.
In conclusion
, I believe that the benefits of this phenomenon are greater than the drawbacks, serious though there are.