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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past. v.174

In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past. v. 174
These days, there is vast consumption of sugary drinks is included in our daily life routines, although everyone is much aware about the adverse effects of this act, but due to the negligence this become the real face of society. Some major factor of this approach are, Due to the shortage of timing and usage or ready-made items in our daily hectic schedules amplify these problems. As, if we look closer to our daily routines each one of us is having merely time to think or watch that what exactly they are consuming in terms of food or drinks. According to the reports of survey in the USA, the consumption of carbohydrate intake in our diet, especially drinks intake exceeded drastically in last 2 decades by 45 percentage. Additionally, on the other side, In our homes we are less active and serve our guests with ready-made market available juices, which contained sugar, however, I reckon that these are major factors contributing to the excess of sugar in our daily life. On the other hand, by conducting few preventive steps one can reduce the habit of drinking such unhealthy drinks. Firstly, the people should develop a habit to read all the contents of the soft drinks, which they are going to consume. Although, all the soft drinks are not having excessive sugar, they should choose such alternative products. Secondly, the parents should guide their adolescents not to imitate everything which is broadcasted on TV and newspaper advertisements and aware them about potential negative side of such products. Lastly, the government should run awareness campaigns throughout the country about healthy diet. For example, Fit India campaign has integrated many citizens towards healthy dietary. In conclusion, this is clear that, we have to be very keen on, what we are eating and whether this is beneficial for our body or not, While managing our daily routines smartly and avoid excess usage of sugar, as this badly affects our body in the long run.
These days, there is vast consumption of sugary
drinks
is included
in our
daily
life routines, although everyone is much aware about the adverse effects of this act,
but
due to the negligence this become the real face of society.

Some
major factor of this approach are, Due to the shortage of timing and usage or ready-made items in our
daily
hectic schedules amplify these problems. As, if we look closer to our
daily
routines each one of us is having
merely
time to
think
or
watch
that what exactly they are consuming in terms of food or
drinks
. According to the reports of survey in the USA, the consumption of carbohydrate intake in our diet,
especially
drinks
intake exceeded
drastically
in last 2 decades by 45 percentage.
Additionally
, on the other side, In our homes we are less active and serve our guests with ready-made market available juices, which contained
sugar
,
however
, I reckon that these are major factors contributing to the excess of
sugar
in our
daily
life.

On the other hand
, by conducting few preventive steps one can
reduce
the habit of drinking such unhealthy
drinks
.
Firstly
, the
people
should develop a habit to read all the contents of the soft
drinks
, which they are going to consume. Although, all the soft
drinks
are not having excessive
sugar
, they should choose such alternative products.
Secondly
, the parents should guide their adolescents not to imitate everything which
is broadcasted
on TV and newspaper advertisements and aware them about potential
negative
side of such products.
Lastly
, the
government
should run awareness campaigns throughout the country about healthy diet.
For example
, Fit India campaign has integrated
many
citizens towards healthy dietary.

In conclusion
, this is
clear
that, we
have to
be
very
keen on, what we are eating and whether this is beneficial for our body or not, While managing our
daily
routines
smartly
and avoid excess usage of
sugar
, as this
badly
affects our body in the long run.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past. v. 174

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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