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Do you agree or disagree? The best teacher should be very knowledgeable. Use examples and reasons to support your idea. v.174

The best teacher should be very knowledgeable. Use examples and reasons to support your idea. v. 174
Being a good teacher is not easy at all. Managing a group of young energetic children needs management skills, creativity, and good knowledge. However, I believe that a key characteristic of a teacher that makes him or her the best one is being knowledgeable. A knowledgeable teacher can better handle the class for some reasons. First of all, a deep and vast knowledge of a subject makes the teacher capable of conveying it to the students' minds. When I was at school age, my mother once told me that when you want to see if you have learnt something well, try to teach it to another person. Because in this way, you need to explain the subject, support it by appropriate examples, introduce supplementary resources, and repeat your idea in different words until it is fully understood by the other one. Secondly, students will rather easily trust on a knowledgeable figure. Young minds are like sponges. They have a hunger for new knowledge. A teacher who can endow a delicious dish of well-backed data to them will be the most desirable thing in the world. Therefore, a knowledgeable teacher will become soon a favorable character for the students. They recognize him or her as a trustable guide who knows every aspect of the subject matter. They trust their teacher which is an important factor in the process of education. Finally, a teacher who has a good confidence to his or her knowledge will feel convenient at the class. Feeling relieved while teaching leads the teacher to be creative. In a class room with a variety of students who are different in intellectual capacity, a teacher should attract all the attentions and convey a specific knowledge to the students' minds. Explaining the same subject in different words and using creative examples needs a minimum of effort for a knowledgeable teacher. To sum it up, to call a teacher the best one, it is of great importance that he or she can explain a subject well with proper examples. Moreover, the students should trust on the teacher in order to let him or her to educate them. Therefore, I think the best teacher should be very knowledgeable.
Being a
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is not easy at all. Managing a group of young energetic children needs management
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skills
, creativity, and
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good
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knowledge
.
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, I believe that a key characteristic of a
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teacher
that
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makes
him or her the best one is being
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knowledgeable
. A
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knowledgeable
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teacher
can better handle the
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class
for
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some
reasons.

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, a deep and vast
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knowledge
of a
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subject
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makes
the
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capable of conveying it to the
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students&
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me that when you want to
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if you have
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something well, try to teach it to another person.
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in this way, you need to
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the
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, support it by appropriate examples, introduce supplementary resources, and repeat your
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idea
in
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words until it is
fully
understood by the other one.

Secondly
,
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students
will
rather
easily
trust on a
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knowledgeable
figure. Young minds are like sponges. They have a hunger for new
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knowledge
. A
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teacher
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who
can endow a delicious dish of well-backed data to them will be the most desirable thing in the world.
Therefore
, a
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knowledgeable
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teacher
will become
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soon
a favorable character for the
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students
. They recognize him or her as a trustable guide
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who
knows every aspect of the
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subject matter
. They trust their
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teacher
which is an
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important
factor in the process of education.

Finally
, a
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teacher
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who
has a
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good
confidence to
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his or her
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knowledge
will feel convenient at the
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class
. Feeling relieved while teaching leads the
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teacher
to be creative. In a
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room with a variety of
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students
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who
are
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different
in intellectual capacity, a
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should attract all the attentions and convey a specific
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knowledge
to the
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students&
#039; minds. Explaining the same
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subject
in
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different
words and using creative examples needs a minimum of effort for a
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knowledgeable
teacher.

To sum it up, to call a
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teacher
the best one, it is of great importance that he or she can
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explain
a
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subject
well with proper examples.
Moreover
, the
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students
should trust on the
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teacher
in order to
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let
him or her to educate them.
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, I
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think
the best
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teacher
should be
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very
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knowledgeable
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Learn everything you can, anytime you can, from anyone you can; there will always come a time when you will be grateful you did.
Sarah Caldwell

IELTS essay The best teacher should be very knowledgeable. Use examples and reasons to support your idea. v. 174

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
365 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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