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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.125

Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 125
Food is one of the basic needs of human beings as it provides energy and nutrition to the people. Consumption of food is increasing exponentially all over the world. Thus, it creates trouble for the farmer to arrange food for all citizens. This essay will discuss the reasons of increasing food demand and put forward several measures that the international community can take to meet this demand. It is an undeniable fact that the ever-expanding population and wastage are two root causes for the increase in the demand for food. Continuous growth in the population has raised the demand for food, which in-turn has brought a situation where crop production is not adequate with the needs. Furthermore, wastage of food is another reason of the demand rising, as people waste more food than consuming it. For instance, in big hotels and restaurants, large amount of food is wasted on a daily basis, rather than proper utilization of food. Nevertheless, there are numerous ways in which the world powers can improve the availability of food. To start with, the government should provide interest free loans to farmers and allocate land space for farming. In addition, farmers should be provided with trainings about modern and advanced farming methods, ways to prevent erosion and proper use of fertilizers, which will help in faster production of crops. Furthermore, people also need to understand the consequences of wasting food. For example, restaurants should have a liberty to fine the customers wasting food, this will certainly reduce the wastage. In conclusion, exponential growth in population and wastage has led to the scarcity of food, but with certain measure such as governments providing easy loans and land space to farmers, and people limit food wasting, can certainly help overcome the increase in food demand
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Food
is one of the basic needs of human beings as it provides energy and nutrition to the
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people
. Consumption of
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food
is increasing
exponentially
all over the world.
Thus
, it creates trouble for the
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farmer
to arrange
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food
for all citizens. This essay will discuss the reasons of increasing
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food
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demand
and put forward several measures that the international community can take to
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meet
this demand.

It is an undeniable fact that the ever-expanding population and wastage are two root causes for the increase in the
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demand
for
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food
. Continuous growth in the population has raised the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
demand
for
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food
, which in-turn has brought a situation where crop production is not adequate with the needs.
Furthermore
, wastage of
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food
is another reason of the
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demand
rising, as
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people
waste more
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food
than consuming it.
For instance
, in
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big
hotels and restaurants, large amount of
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food
is wasted
on a daily basis,
rather
than proper utilization of food.

Nevertheless
, there are numerous ways in which the world powers can
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improve
the availability of
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food
. To
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start
with, the
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government
should provide interest free loans to
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farmers
and allocate land space for farming.
In addition
,
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farmers
should
be provided
with trainings about modern and advanced farming methods, ways to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
erosion and proper
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use
of fertilizers, which will
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help
in faster production of crops.
Furthermore
,
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people
also
need to understand the consequences of wasting
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food
.
For example
, restaurants should have a liberty to fine the customers wasting
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food
, this will
certainly
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reduce
the wastage.

In conclusion
, exponential growth in population and wastage has led to the scarcity of
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food
,
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but
with certain measure such as
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governments
providing easy loans and land space to
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farmers
, and
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people
limit
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food
wasting, can
certainly
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help
overcome the increase in
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food
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demand
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 125

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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