It has been observed that most of the wealthy nations provide financial support to the impoverished countries. But, unfortunately this does not help the underdeveloped nations to solve their problems. So I completely agree that, these nations require other sources of aid from developed countries to eradicate poverty from poor countries.
To embark on, although the financial support resolves some of the problems such as public health issues by providing free health service during floods and droughts, but most of the other issues like literacy, GDP and economical growth remains unsolved. For instance, the united states of America provide financial aid to the poor nations like Iran and Syria during their difficult conditions but still they remain as underdeveloped countries.
To turn on possible other aids, firstly, wealthy nations should invest some money in the economically deprived countries to build free educational services to increase the literacy rate, which in turn help in the economic growth by attaining good jobs by the people of the poor nations. Education is the key to resolve many of the problems in any part of the world. Secondly, most of the countries are remained poor because of improper laws and rules followed. So, developed countries should help these nations to build strong constitution and bring strict amendments in the law. Furthermore, rich countries should also provide free health services and establish hospitals with modern techniques.
To conclude, only financial support from wealthy countries does not eradicate the poverty in the poorer nations, they should also help them in others ways like bringing up literacy rate and providing free medical service.
It has
been observed
that most of the wealthy
nations
provide
financial
support to the impoverished
countries
.
But
, unfortunately this does not
help
the underdeveloped
nations
to solve their problems.
So
I completely
agree
that, these
nations
require
other
sources of aid from developed
countries
to eradicate poverty from
poor
countries.
To embark on, although the
financial
support resolves
some of the
problems such as public health issues by providing
free
health
service
during floods and droughts,
but
most of the
other
issues like literacy, GDP and
economical
growth remains unsolved.
For instance
, the
united states of America
provide
financial
aid to the
poor
nations
like Iran and Syria during their difficult conditions
but
still
they remain as underdeveloped countries.
To turn on possible
other
aids,
firstly
, wealthy
nations
should invest
some
money in the
economically
deprived
countries
to build
free
educational
services
to increase the literacy rate, which in turn
help
in the economic growth by attaining
good
jobs by the
people
of the
poor
nations
. Education is the key to resolve
many
of the problems in any part of the world.
Secondly
, most of the
countries
are remained
poor
because
of improper laws and
rules
followed.
So
, developed
countries
should
help
these
nations
to build strong constitution and bring strict amendments in the law.
Furthermore
, rich
countries
should
also
provide
free
health
services
and establish hospitals with modern techniques.
To conclude
,
only
financial
support from wealthy
countries
does not eradicate the poverty in the poorer
nations
, they should
also
help
them in others ways like bringing up literacy rate and providing
free
medical
service
.
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