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Do you agree or disagree? Although technology had made communication easier, there are still as many misunderstandings among people as there were in the past. v.118

Although technology had made communication easier, there are still as many misunderstandings among people as there were in the past. v. 118
It is a widely accepted fact that technology has made communication easier. With the help of technology we can communicate with anyone anywhere in the world in fraction of a second. However, people are divided over whether this has reduced the misunderstandings among people as compared to the past. Personally, in my opinion, even though communication is made easier, misunderstandings among people have decreased only to a certain extent. This is because one of the main reason for misunderstanding among people is because of their ego. In olden days, it was very difficult for people to communicate with each other. They with have to call the person' s home telephone or send a letter or have to go directly to their home in order to talk to each other. Even then the chances are rare that they can find the person they want to talk to. However, today, technology have developed so much that people can communicate with each other whenever they want to as most of them have a mobile phone with them. Also, there are a number of apps like Skype, Hangout, Whatsapp, Facebook and Snapchat which help people to have a video conversation. These apps have helped people to talk with each other anytime and clear their misunderstandings to a great extent. However, in many situations, a person to call another when they have a serious contention will be against their ego. Their self-consciousness might not allow them to call the other person and clear their misunderstandings even when they know they are wrong. For instance, once my friend had a serious disagreement with her husband over a very serious matter and in which she was later proved to me wrong. Despite having a mobile phone which she can use to call her husband and clear the misunderstanding immediately, her ego didn' t allow her to call him and reach a consensus. And finally both of their family members had to get involved to clear the misunderstanding. In conclusion, technology has greatly helped in communicating with each other and to clear the misunderstandings. But it is the attitude of the people which have to change to make it more effective.
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fact that
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technology
has made communication easier. With the
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help
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technology
we can communicate with anyone anywhere in the world in fraction of a second.
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,
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people
are divided
over whether this has
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reduced
the
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misunderstandings
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people
as compared to the past.
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, in my opinion,
even though
communication
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misunderstandings
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people
have decreased
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only
to a certain extent. This is
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one of the main reason for
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misunderstanding
among
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people
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is
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because
of their ego.

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difficult for
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people
to communicate with each
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other
. They with
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have to
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call
the
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have to
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directly
to their home in order to talk to each
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other
. Even then the chances are rare that they can find the
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person
they want to talk to.
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,
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today
,
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technology
have developed
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so
much that
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people
can communicate with each
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other
whenever they want to as most of them have a mobile phone with them.
Also
, there are a number of apps like Skype, Hangout,
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Whatsapp
, Facebook and Snapchat which
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help
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people
to have a video conversation. These apps have
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helped
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people
to talk with each
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other
anytime and
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clear
their
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misunderstandings
to a great extent.

However
, in
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many
situations, a
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person
to
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call
another when they have a serious contention will be against their ego. Their self-consciousness might not
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allow
them to
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the
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other
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person
and
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clear
their
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misunderstandings
even when they know they are
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wrong
.
For instance
, once my friend had a serious disagreement with her husband over a
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very
serious matter and in which she was later proved to me
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wrong
. Despite having a mobile phone which she can
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use
to
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call
her husband and
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clear
the
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misunderstanding
immediately, her ego
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allow
her to
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call
him and reach a consensus. And
finally
both of their family members had to
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get
involved to
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clear
the misunderstanding.

In conclusion
,
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technology
has
greatly
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helped
in communicating with each
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other
and to
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clear
the
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misunderstandings
.
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But
it is the attitude of the
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people
which
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have to
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change
to
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make
it more effective.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Although technology had made communication easier, there are still as many misunderstandings among people as there were in the past. v. 118

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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