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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students benefit more from classes with a large number of students than they do from smaller classesUse specific examples and details to support your opinion. v.105

Students benefit more from classes with a large number of students than they do from smaller classesUse specific examples and details to support your opinion. v. 105
Watching movies is a popular activity in todays world. The importance of watching movies is considered by some people to be a good thing, however, others disagree. This essay will discuss the importance of watching movies on the daily life of people. Watching movies increases the human brain exposure to topics otherwise unknown by the viewer. When watching a new movie for the first time, the person will get exposed to new topics and their brains will learn new ideas. In addition, watching a movie gives the human mind new idea's which they can implement in their daily life. For example, when watching a movie about fiction, the viewer's knowledge of fiction will increase significantly, which they can learn from and possibly write an article or an essay about. Movies of different genres are important for the human brain to tap into new ideas and implement them. Because of the popularity of movies, people tend to watch movies together and that brings people together. Watching movies increases the social interaction between humans. This causes humans to watch and discuss the topics of the movie and interact. For example, if a person watch's a movie, they are very likely to discuss the outcome of the movie with other people. Also, if two or more people watch a movie together, this will increase their social time together and make them more sociable. Watching movies increases the social interactions between people. In conclusion, movies are great for the human brain and for their social interactions. Movies are important for brain development as they teach people new things. In addition, they cause people to come together and interact which increases their socialization.
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todays
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some
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people
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good
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movies
on the daily life of
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people
.

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movies
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increases
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human
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brain
exposure to topics
otherwise
unknown by the viewer. When watching a
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new
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movie
for the
first
time, the person will
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get
exposed to
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new
topics and their
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brains
will learn
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new
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ideas
.
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, watching a
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movie
gives the
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human
mind
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new
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idea
's which they can implement in their daily life.
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, when watching a
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movie
about fiction, the viewer's knowledge of fiction will
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increase
significantly
, which they can learn from and
possibly
write an article or an essay about.
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of
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different
genres are
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important
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human
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brain
to tap into
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new
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and implement them.

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,
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together and that brings
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people
together. Watching
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increases
the
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social
interaction between
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humans
. This causes
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humans
to
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watch
and discuss the topics of the
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movie
and interact.
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's a
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, they are
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likely to discuss the outcome of the
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with other
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together, this will
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increase
their
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interactions between
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people
.

In conclusion
,
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are great for the
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human
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and for their
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social
interactions.
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for
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development as they teach
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people
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new
things.
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, they cause
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come
together and interact which
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increases
their socialization.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Students benefit more from classes with a large number of students than they do from smaller classesUse specific examples and details to support your opinion. v. 105

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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