Shopping is considered to be a fun activity, although the youth today is using their free period to roam in malls. This trend is proving to be harmful to society. It is a debatable matter as both the arguments are sound.
Young adults love about mixing with their friends at shopping centres. It usually has a play area, a food court for whenever anyone gets hungry, movie theatres, and the best part is an indulgence in window-shopping. Girls of a certain age enjoy headings to the various attractions in the mall. They range from beauty salons to make-up shops. Well, the boys would rather lock themselves in the game room filled with lucrative car and bike games. Since, the inception of the malls even families spend their entire day shopping as a fun day out. In every city, the development is based on number of malls as they are self-contained. Moreover, it is a great place for youngsters to pass time while chatting their time away. There are locations to huddle up and gossip. These facilities tend to draw adults to spend longer durations.
On the contrary, the money spent is often futile. People end up becoming Shopaholics, as they can't control their buying habits. They often tend to take therapy to get out of this phase. For example: people, who buying unnecessary items even without us. This can have detrimental effects, and hence is feared by society.
In conclusion, as mentioned in science that too much of anything leads to a disaster in the same way shopping to a limit is required. Although, excessive purchase is dangerous.
Shopping
is considered
to be a fun activity, although the youth
today
is using their free period to roam in
malls
. This trend is proving to be harmful to society. It is a debatable matter as both the arguments are sound.
Young adults
love
about mixing with their friends at
shopping
centres
. It
usually
has a play area, a food court for whenever anyone
gets
hungry, movie
theatres
, and the best part is an indulgence in window-shopping. Girls of a certain age enjoy headings to the various attractions in the
mall
. They range from beauty salons to
make
-up shops. Well, the boys would
rather
lock themselves in the game room filled with lucrative car and bike games. Since, the inception of the
malls
even families spend their entire day
shopping
as a fun day out. In every city, the development
is based
on number of
malls
as they are self-contained.
Moreover
, it is a great place for youngsters to pass time while chatting their time away. There are locations to huddle up and gossip. These facilities tend to draw adults to spend longer durations.
On the contrary
, the money spent is
often
futile.
People
end
up becoming Shopaholics, as they can't control their buying habits. They
often
tend to take therapy to
get
out of this phase.
For example
:
people
, who buying unnecessary items even without us. This can have detrimental effects, and
hence
is feared
by society.
In conclusion
, as mentioned in science that too much of anything leads to a disaster
in the same way
shopping
to a limit
is required
.
Although
, excessive
purchase
is
dangerous
.
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