Do you agree or disagree with the following: Some people believe that video games could inspire young students interest and make their study more efficient rather than distract them and be a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video v.1
with the following: Some people believe that video games could inspire young students interest and make their study more efficient rather than distract them and be a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video v. 1
Similarity between the countries is increasing as people are able to get things from anywhere across the world. Due to this, it has reduced the need to travel and it has facilitated our lives. From my perspective, this is advantageous for the people.
When we are able to get the things we want from the place we live, this reduces the need to travel which in turn helps us in saving money. If we want to buy a product native to a particular country, we can find it even in our country. For example, people living in the United States find the south India foods as delicious, due to the reason they find it in their country, they don not have to travel to India to eat it.
In addition to this, the iPhones which were native only to the United States in the year 2007 moved to other parts of the world, due to the growing need of people. Therefore, people can buy it from anywhere, as most of them find it intriguing. Due to this, it had introduced many service centres across the world, one more point worth considering is that fashion is an attribute which was distinct in each country, but due to the globalisation, the different outfits and apparel are available to everyone. Consequently, this had reduced the difference between countries, to illustrate this, a recent survey conducted by the "Vogue" magazine depicts that the attire around the world was distinct but now 80% of the population are fascinated by the same type of looks.
In conclusion, globalisation has made our lives easy as it had reduced the need for travelling and helped us in getting things from the place we live. In my opinion, it has provided us with a comfortable live than in the past.
Similarity between the
countries
is increasing as
people
are able to
get
things from anywhere across the
world
.
Due
to this, it has
reduced
the
need
to travel and it has facilitated our
lives
. From my perspective, this is advantageous for the
people
.
When we are able to
get
the things we want from the place we
live
, this
reduces
the
need
to travel which in turn
helps
us in saving money. If we want to
buy
a product native to a particular
country
, we can
find
it even in our
country
.
For example
,
people
living in the United States
find
the south India foods as delicious,
due
to the reason they
find
it in their
country
, they
don not
have to
travel to India to eat it.
In addition
to this, the iPhones which were native
only
to the United States in the year 2007
moved
to other parts of the
world
,
due
to the growing
need
of
people
.
Therefore
,
people
can
buy
it from anywhere, as most of them
find
it intriguing.
Due
to this, it had introduced
many
service
centres
across the
world
, one more point worth considering is that fashion is an attribute which was distinct in each
country
,
but
due
to the
globalisation
, the
different
outfits and apparel are available to everyone.
Consequently
, this had
reduced
the difference between
countries
, to illustrate this, a recent survey conducted by the
"
Vogue
"
magazine depicts that the attire around the
world
was distinct
but
now
80% of the population
are fascinated
by the same type of looks.
In conclusion
,
globalisation
has made our
lives
easy as it had
reduced
the
need
for travelling and
helped
us in getting things from the place we
live
. In my opinion, it has provided us with a comfortable
live
than in the past.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes