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do you agree or disagree with following statement. Childhood is the most happiest part of one's life. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion v.4

Childhood is the most happiest part of one's life. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion v. 4
With ever increasing world population, and more and more people capable of buying personal vehicles, the number of these machines on the road have been on the rise ever since, leading to numerous problems. The increased usage of personal cars has not only taken its toll on the environment in the form of air pollution but is also responsible for huge traffic congestions in cities causing a lot of noise pollution. Apart from refraining the population from personal vehicular usage, the demography should switch to using public transportation instead and should opt for cleaner alternatives for gas powered four wheelers. Since the advent of the industrial era, man has been using his private cars for travelling from place to place and recently the count of cars has gone up. This has laid immense pressure on fossil fuel reserves and is also one of the main causes of air pollution. These gas-powered machines burn fuel which then converts heat energy into mechanical energy which drives these cars. This internal combustion of fuels releases carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, and other harmful gases into the atmosphere causing air pollution. For example, cities like Delhi and Beijing were ranked as the worst cities regarding the air quality index. Also, traffic congestions have become common in major cities due to the increased number in vehicular traffic. Such congestions cause a lot of noise pollution in the vicinity due to constant honking and engine noise. A recent report stated that, car horns in city streets are the second most sources of loud irritating noise next to jet engines. In order to cope with these environmental issues, discouraging car usage is not the only solution. To effectively combat the issue of air pollution, citizens should resort to using public transport. This would help decrease the carbon footprint of individual people as a single bus would be serving 20-25 people at a time. This will also reduce traffic congestion as dedicated bus lanes could be constructed for faster commuting. Private vehicle owners should switch to cleaner alternatives of personal transportation such as using green fuels like bio-diesel or changing to electric vehicles. Such measures would help reduce the environmental impact caused by the excessive usage of personal transportation. In conclusion the usage of private vehicular has increased and evidently has caused many problems. The increased usage has marked its effects on the air quality of the environment and has caused increased traffic congestion in major cities. Resorting to public transportation and using electric vehicles has been discussed as few of the effective solutions in countering the effects of increasing usage of personal vehicle.
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ever increasing
world population, and more and more
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people
capable of buying
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personal
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vehicles
, the number of these machines on the road have been on the rise ever since, leading to numerous problems. The
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increased
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usage
of
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personal
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cars
has not
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only
taken its toll on the environment in the form of
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air
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pollution
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but
is
also
responsible for huge
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traffic
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congestions
in
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cities
causing
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a lot of
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noise
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pollution
. Apart from refraining the population from
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personal
vehicular
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usage
, the demography should switch to using public transportation
instead
and should opt for cleaner alternatives for gas powered four
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wheelers
.

Since the advent of the industrial era,
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man
has been using his private
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cars
for travelling from place to place and recently the count of
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cars
has gone up. This has laid immense pressure on fossil
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fuel
reserves and is
also
one of the main causes of
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air
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pollution
. These gas-powered machines burn
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fuel
which then converts heat energy into mechanical energy which drives these
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cars
. This internal combustion of
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fuels
releases carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, and other harmful gases into the atmosphere causing
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air
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pollution
.
For example
,
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cities
like Delhi and Beijing
were ranked
as the worst
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cities
regarding the
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air
quality index.
Also
,
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traffic
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congestions
have become common in major
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cities
due to the
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increased
number in vehicular
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traffic
. Such
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congestions
cause
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a lot of
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noise
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pollution
in the vicinity due to constant honking and engine
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noise
. A recent report stated that,
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car
horns in city streets are the second most sources of loud irritating
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noise
next
to jet engines.

In order to cope with these environmental issues, discouraging
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car
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usage
is not the
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only
solution. To
effectively
combat the issue of
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air
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pollution
, citizens should resort to using public transport. This would
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help
decrease the carbon footprint of individual
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people
as a single bus would be serving 20-25
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people
at a time. This will
also
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reduce
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traffic
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congestion
as dedicated bus lanes could
be constructed
for faster commuting. Private
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vehicle
owners should switch to cleaner alternatives of
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personal
transportation such as using green
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fuels
like bio-diesel or changing to electric
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vehicles
. Such measures would
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help
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reduce
the environmental impact caused by the excessive
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usage
of
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personal
transportation.

In conclusion
the
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usage
of private vehicular has
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increased
and
evidently
has caused
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many
problems. The
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increased
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usage
has marked its effects on the
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air
quality of the environment and has caused
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increased
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traffic
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congestion
in major
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cities
. Resorting to public transportation and using electric
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vehicles
has
been discussed
as few of the effective solutions in countering the effects of increasing
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usage
of
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personal
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vehicle
.
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IELTS essay Childhood is the most happiest part of one's life. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
435 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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