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Do you agree or disagree that children cause their parents a lot of trouble. Give details and examples in your response. v.1

that children cause their parents a lot of trouble. Give details and examples in your response. v. 1
These few years’ examination has become on way of assessment of students’ performance and their performance in these exams is required to move students from one stage of their academic progression to the other. The majority of the academia has sole confidence in this approach and it has become a standard and the norm. Firstly, I struggle to understand how a few hour exams can assess a student’s capability of an academic work done for over a semester or a session. It is obvious that that assessment will not be completely thorough. In every course, there are areas where student could be better and some areas where they are weak. However, it means if a student gets exam questions in his weak areas, then the student will not pass that course and it is deemed that the student has failed. This kind of assessment is one-sided and should not be the best approach for assessing a student’s understanding of the course. Secondly, in a situation where on the exam day the student is either sick or psychologically disturbed then it’s likely the student might not perform well or either fail the course. In this case the exam has not shown the ability of the student. This buttress the saying that “that an examination is not the true test of a man’s knowledge". Finally, I strongly recommend a continuous assessment of the student over the period of the course work, this should include project work, group work, assignment and quiz. These are the best approaches to assessing a student’s performance.
These few years’ examination has become on way of
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assessment
of
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students’
performance and their performance in these exams
is required
to
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move
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students
from one stage of their academic progression to the other. The majority of the academia has sole confidence in this approach and it has become a standard and the norm.

Firstly
, I struggle to understand how a few hour exams can assess a
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student’s
capability of an academic
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work
done for over a semester or a session. It is obvious that that
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assessment
will not be completely thorough. In every
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course
, there are areas where
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student
could be better and
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some
areas where they are weak.
However
, it means if a
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student
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gets
exam questions in his weak areas, then the
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student
will not pass that
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course
and it
is deemed
that the
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student
has failed. This kind of
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assessment
is one-sided and should not be the best approach for assessing a
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student’s
understanding of the course.

Secondly
, in a situation where on the exam day the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
is either sick or
psychologically
disturbed then it’s likely the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
might not perform well or either fail the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
In this case
the exam has not shown the ability of the
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student
. This buttress the saying that “that an examination is not the true
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
of a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
’s knowledge
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"
.

Finally
, I
strongly
recommend a continuous
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assessment
of the
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student
over the period of the
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course
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work
, this should include project
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work
, group
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, assignment and quiz. These are the best approaches to assessing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student’s
performance.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay that children cause their parents a lot of trouble. Give details and examples in your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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