It has been observed in recent years that the number of men and women choosing to live in large cities to be close to their work is increasing which have generated multiple problems such as in transport and accomodation. Thus, given that the industrial sector is progressing very fast, many people think that workplaces should be relocated to the rural areas. In my opinion, I believe that it is very essential to encourage firms to move outside large cities in order to benefit from its proven impact on society.
On one hand, it is known that city people are suffering from small living spaces due to the significant increase of workers living in cities. By contracting to the countryside where land is still available for new building or even living residence. In addition, accomodation costs will decrease. For example, the rent of a small apartment in big cities such as Paris is equal to that of a house in the surrounding of the city.
Another point to consider, most people prefer city life which was the main reason behind the concentration of businesses there. Hence, it will be extremely hard for workers to rearrange their schedules to fit the long daily journeys to rural areas. In addition, those journeys may not be as easy and smooth, especially using public transportation. For instance, some locations need more then one transport mode to be reached and so this will become very time consuming
In conclusion, we live in an age where housing and transport problems seems to be very serious in large cities. As a result, it seems wise to get behind the idea that businesses should consider moving to the countryside in order to enhance daily life.
It has
been observed
in recent years that the number of
men
and women choosing to
live
in large
cities
to be close to their work is increasing which have generated multiple problems such as in transport and
accomodation
.
Thus
,
given
that the industrial sector is progressing
very
fast
,
many
people
think
that workplaces should
be relocated
to the rural areas. In my opinion, I believe that it is
very
essential to encourage firms to
move
outside large
cities
in order to benefit from its proven impact on society.
On one hand, it
is known
that city
people
are suffering from
small
living spaces due to the significant increase of workers living in
cities
. By contracting to the countryside where land is
still
available for new building or even living residence.
In addition
,
accomodation
costs will decrease.
For example
, the rent of a
small
apartment in
big
cities
such as Paris is equal to that of a
house
in the surrounding of the city.
Another point to consider, most
people
prefer city life which was the main reason behind the concentration of businesses there.
Hence
, it will be
extremely
hard
for workers to rearrange their schedules to fit the long daily journeys to rural areas.
In addition
, those journeys may not be as easy and smooth,
especially
using public transportation.
For instance
,
some
locations need more
then
one transport mode to
be reached
and
so
this will become
very
time consuming
In conclusion
, we
live
in an age where housing and transport problems seems to be
very
serious in large
cities
.
As a result
, it seems wise to
get
behind the
idea
that businesses should consider moving to the countryside in order to enhance daily life.
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