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Do you agree or disagree? Primary school teachers should not give children (5-10) assignments more than 30 minutes, because there are enough instructions to learn in regular school classes. v.34

Primary school teachers should not give children (5-10) assignments more than 30 minutes, because there are enough instructions to learn in regular school classes. v. 34
Business attire in an organization has always been debatable. Much relaxation has been offered to employees in terms of their dress code as far as no compromise is made on the productivity of the organization. While few organizations want their employees to appear in smart outfits. This essay will discuss why following the dress code is not necessary anymore. Companies reckon that quality of output is directly linked to the satisfaction of employees hence, they allow them to wear what they want to become comfortable to perform effectively and efficiently. It is widely believed that a person who achieves solace in his mental state can bring out his maximum output. Provided that quality of work is above everything in the company and it can be only achieved when the employee is satisfied. I have seen a few employees of a firm which allows its staff to come to the office in any fashion they want to. Indeed, this organization has set a benchmark of success in recent times. In short, quality is the outcome of policies that suits the staff. Moreover, companies that are of the orthodox mindset emphasized the company code of dressing. They believe that the corporate environment should be established in a company. Workers should choose clothes smartly and focus on their hygiene since the customers might get unsatisfied if they witness an unprofessional environment. As a result, this environment also promotes positive relationships between the co-workers which in terms is directly related to the outcome. Although, it creates a sense of competitiveness in terms of clothing. In my opinion, the standard of work done is related to the comfort level of the workers. Hence, they should be allowed to dress as they want. Moreover, putting restrictions on casual clothing will increase the distress of an employee which in term will decrease his productivity.
Business attire in an
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organization
has always been debatable. Much relaxation has
been offered
to
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employees
in terms of their dress code as far as no compromise
is made
on the productivity of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organization
.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
few
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organizations
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want
their
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employees
to appear in smart outfits. This essay will discuss why following the dress code is not necessary anymore.

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Companies
reckon that quality of output is
directly
linked to the satisfaction of
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employees
hence
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
them to wear what they
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want
to become comfortable to perform
effectively
and
efficiently
. It is
widely
believed that a person who achieves solace in his mental state can bring out his maximum output. Provided that quality of work is above everything in the
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company
and it can be
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only
achieved when the
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employee
is satisfied
. I have
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seen
a few
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employees
of a firm which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
its staff to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the office in any fashion they
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want
to.
Indeed
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organization
has set a benchmark of success in recent times. In short, quality is the outcome of policies that suits the staff.

Moreover
,
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companies
that are of the orthodox mindset emphasized the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
code of dressing. They believe that the corporate environment should
be established
in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. Workers should choose clothes
smartly
and focus on their hygiene since the customers might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
unsatisfied if they witness an unprofessional environment.
As a result
, this environment
also
promotes
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positive
relationships between the co-workers which in terms is
directly
related to the outcome.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, it creates a sense of competitiveness in terms of clothing.

In my opinion, the standard of work done
is related
to the comfort level of the workers.
Hence
, they should be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to dress as they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
.
Moreover
, putting restrictions on casual clothing will increase the distress of an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
which in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
term
will decrease his productivity.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Primary school teachers should not give children (5-10) assignments more than 30 minutes, because there are enough instructions to learn in regular school classes. v. 34

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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