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Do you agree or disagree? teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom v.201

teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom v. 201
From many erudite thinker' s points of view, although human is on the edge of civilization and stands on a pinnacle of wisdom, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of social and political views on upbringing and developing student' s points of view. Furthermore, in numerous circle of study and connoisseurs of the field, whereas some are inclined toward the opinion that teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom, on the other extreme of the rope, some believe that teachers should create a free atmosphere for students to say their points of view free and allow them to explain and talk about different issues. While both sides take their own positions, from my vantage point, the latter group carries more weight and my reasons are discussed below. The first exquisite reason of the current discussion which demands a keen contemplation is that students should have a freedom to say different points of view in a classroom and their teacher should not intricate them to a narrow point of view. Because freedom in saying idea lets the students improve their knowledge and pursue them to study more about that issue. For example, when you say your idea about the political issue in classroom freely, other students can listen and say their ideas and you can ameliorate your idea and study more to understand that issue. So a teacher can guide you but he should not force you to accept that view. The second reason coming to my mind cogently to substantiate and vindicate my standpoint concerning this issue is that by saying different views without any obligation, the students can improve their self-confidence and be ready to go to future society. For instance, when the students take part in some special issues in class and say their view freely they can practice improving their self-confidence and social relationships. But if their teachers do not allow them to speak freely and force them to accept and agree to one view, they can not find themselves and imagine that they are not useful persons. So the teachers play a crucial role in the student' s future. To put everything in a nutshell a broad look over the main points and discussions reveals the fact that teachers should create a free atmosphere for students to say their points of view free and allow them to explain and talk about different issues. Actually, speaking in a free atmosphere can improve the student' s knowledge and self-confidence and prepare them for future.
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in the classroom, on the other extreme of the rope,
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, the latter group carries more weight and my reasons
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students
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in a classroom and their
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should not intricate them to a narrow
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students
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about the political
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he should not force you to accept that view.

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cogently
to substantiate and vindicate my standpoint concerning this
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issue
is that by saying
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different
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views
without any obligation, the
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students
can
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improve
their self-confidence and be ready to go to future society.
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they can practice improving their self-confidence and social relationships.
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, they can not find themselves and imagine that they are not useful persons.
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points
and discussions reveals the fact that
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teachers
should create a
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free
atmosphere for
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students
to say their
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points
of
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view
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free
and
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allow
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explain
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different
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issues
. Actually, speaking in a
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improve
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student&
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IELTS essay teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom v. 201

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
427 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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