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Do you agree or disagree? The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character. v.165

The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character. v. 165
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that clothes exhibit some important information about peoples. In dawn of humanity, humans attempt to dress some suitable clothes based on their habitat, statue in the society and their habits. Not all people concur when this issue arises. To being cognizant to the logic behind those who endorse or repudiate the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that people’s clothes could be a proper factor to judge about their personality and characters. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint. To commence with, a consensus has yet to be reached; however, regarding the implication of the consistency among people job position and their costume based upon the statistics of different general questionnaires in sundry countries, people are unanimous about the conviction humankind should dress based on their job. For instance, people who work in offices and government organizations should dress formal. Doctors and nurses dress white uniforms which indicate their job statues. To sum, even though it is not correct in all situation, people used various style of clothing related to their occupations. In addition to the reason raised above; impact of people’s tendencies and interests could also substantiate the justifiability of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief, people considers own interests in providing their clothes. To elucidate on, people with fashion dresses like to be up to date, and athletics use sports cloth. In addition, people wear dirty and untidy clothes are irregular and do not donate enough time for their appearance. The last but not the least, wealth has played paramount role in the selected clothes by people. In some situation, people who are very rich use expensive jeans with valuable watches and jewels. In contrast, people with simple T-shirts and pants are not very rich and luxurious. Drawing upon the reason, discreetly put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic is concerned, I reiterate that the people’s style for clothing could be used as identifying factor to judge about some partial personality or character features. There are some reasons such as wealth, statue in the job and interests which are influential in the people’s wearing.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that
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some
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important
information about
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peoples
. In dawn of humanity, humans attempt to
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dress
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some
suitable
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clothes
based on their habitat, statue in the society and their habits. Not all
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people
concur when this issue arises. To being cognizant to the logic behind those who endorse or repudiate the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that
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people’s
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clothes
could be a proper factor to judge about their personality and characters. In what follows, I will
aptly
substantiate my viewpoint.

To commence with, a consensus has
yet
to
be reached
;
however
, regarding the implication of the consistency among
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people
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job
position and their costume based upon the statistics of
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different
general questionnaires in sundry countries,
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people
are unanimous about the conviction humankind should
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dress
based on their
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job
.
For instance
,
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people
who work in offices and
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government
organizations should
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dress
formal. Doctors and nurses
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dress
white uniforms which indicate their
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job
statues. To sum,
even though
it is not correct in all situation,
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people
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used
various style of clothing related to their occupations.

In addition
to the reason raised above; impact of
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people’s
tendencies and interests could
also
substantiate the
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justifiability
of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief,
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people
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considers
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own
interests in providing their
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clothes
. To elucidate on,
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people
with fashion
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dresses
like to be up to date, and athletics
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use
sports
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cloth
.
In addition
,
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people
wear dirty and untidy
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clothes
are irregular and do not donate
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enough
time for their appearance.

The last
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but
not the least, wealth has played paramount role in the selected
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clothes
by
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people
. In
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some
situation,
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people
who are
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very
rich
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use
expensive jeans with valuable
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watches
and jewels.
In contrast
,
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people
with simple T-shirts and pants are not
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very
rich and luxurious.

Drawing upon the reason,
discreetly
put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic
is concerned
, I reiterate that the
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people’s
style for clothing could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as identifying factor to judge about
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some
partial personality or character features. There are
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some
reasons such as wealth, statue in the
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job
and interests which are influential in the
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people’s
wearing.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character. v. 165

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
375 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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