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Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays it is not important for people to haveregular family meals together. v.105

Nowadays it is not important for people to haveregular family meals together. v. 105
There is no doubt that having regular meals with family members is one of the most enjoyable activities in many people' s lives. Nowadays, due to the fact that individuals lead a hectic life, it is very hard to have a regular meal with family. Some people believe that it is not an important issue to have always meals with family, while I am of the opinion that this tradition is one of the most enjoyable and necessary activities among people. There are numerous reasons, two of which I will explore in what follows. The first vital point to bear in mind is that in the contemporary world, because of busy schedule of every individal, it is very hard to all family members have a regular meal with each other. This reality leads to different health problems for individuals. As a conseqence, nowadays, lots of people underestood the importantce of having meal with their family members. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Back in college, I had a very compact schedule which forced me to go to college from dum to dask. Therefore, I had to eat something on campus instead of going home and have a healthy meal with my family. After a while, I loose my health and got severe stoamache because of eating lots of junk food at university. Had I went home and eat my launch with my family, I would not have loosed my health during college. The second noteworthy reason which deserves some words here is that by having a regular meal with family, we can maintain our mental health as well as our physical health. In the way of illustration, when individuals have a regular meal with their lovely family, they can relieve their stress and tention and be unwind. Besides, in this way they can gather around and state their problems to each other. this opportunity would help them to fortify their bond with each other and become more closer to their family members. Give a personal experience as an example. In our home, we have a custom that all of the family always should eat breakfeast together. This tradition helps us to always be aware of problems of each other and it made us so close to each other. this example demonstrate how it is crucial to have a regular meal with our family members. On the whole, based on the points mentioned above, we can conclude that having a regular meal can help individuals not only be healthy but also mentain their bond with their family.
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is one of the most enjoyable activities in
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individuals
lead a hectic life, it is
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hard
to have a
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regular
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with
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family
.
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people
believe that it is not an
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important
issue to have always
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meals
with
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family
, while I am of the opinion that this tradition is one of the most enjoyable and necessary activities among
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people
. There are numerous reasons, two of which I will explore in what follows.

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first
vital point to bear in mind is that in the contemporary world,
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, it is
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to all
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have a
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with each
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. This reality leads to
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health
problems for
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individuals
. As a
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conseqence
, nowadays, lots of
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people
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underestood
the
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importantce
of
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having
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meal
with their
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family
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members
. My
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own
experience is a compelling example of this. Back in college, I had a
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very
compact schedule which forced me to go to college from
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dum
to
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dask
.
Therefore
, I had to eat something on campus
instead
of going home and have a healthy
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meal
with my
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family
. After a while, I
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loose
my
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health
and
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got
severe
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stoamache
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because
of eating lots of junk food at university. Had I
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went
home and eat my launch with my
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family
, I would not have loosed my
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health
during college.

The second noteworthy reason which deserves
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words here is that by
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a
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regular
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with
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family
, we can maintain our mental
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health
as well
as our physical
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health
. In the way of illustration, when
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individuals
have a
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regular
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meal
with their lovely
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family
, they can relieve their
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stress
and
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tention
and be
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unwind
.
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, in this way they can gather around and state their problems to each
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other
.
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this
opportunity would
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help
them to fortify their bond with each
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other
and become
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more closer
to their
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family
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members
. Give a personal experience as an example. In our home, we have a custom that
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all of the
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family
always should eat
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breakfeast
together. This tradition
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helps
us to always be aware of problems of each
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other
and it made us
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so
close to each
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other
.
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this
example demonstrate how it is crucial to have a
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regular
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meal
with our
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family
members.

On the whole
, based on the points mentioned above, we can conclude that
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a
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regular
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can
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help
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individuals
not
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be healthy
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also
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mentain
their bond with their
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family
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
56Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays it is not important for people to haveregular family meals together. v. 105

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
429 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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