Children are like clay after giving a shape they form in that shape. So as on the basis, childhood is very important age of the life to make their future. For that most of the people think that studying and playing is important, in contrast other thinks household chores are important. this would be the grate debt. In my point of view i would like to support to give more attention for playing and studying rather than help in house hold chores. My reasons to agree the sentence are as follows.
First of all I would like to say that studying and playing is most important part in the childhood life. These make children career strong. But household work is also important to make them responsible. Children should be more focused on the studying and playing. Because somethings should be happen in certain age. Person can learn household chores in any age, but studying and playing can only be learned in childhood.
Secondly, studying and playing can make children future career. If children spend excessive time in household time they could not give required time for the important things. In my point of view children should do house hold chores in the extra time after completing major work.
In the end, household chores is also important as studying and playing, but with respect to the time, we should know what is necessity to the children.
Children
are like clay after giving a shape they form in that shape.
So
as on the basis, childhood is
very
important
age of the life to
make
their future. For that most of the
people
think
that
studying
and
playing
is
important
,
in contrast
other
thinks
household
chores
are
important
.
this
would be the grate debt. In my point of view
i
would like to support to give more attention for
playing
and
studying
rather
than
help
in
house
hold
chores
. My reasons to
agree
the sentence are as follows.
First of all
I would like to say that
studying
and
playing
is
most
important
part in the childhood life. These
make
children
career strong.
But
household
work is
also
important
to
make
them responsible.
Children
should be more focused on the
studying
and
playing
.
Because
somethings should be
happen
in certain age. Person can learn
household
chores
in any age,
but
studying
and
playing
can
only
be learned
in childhood.
Secondly
,
studying
and
playing
can
make
children
future career. If
children
spend excessive
time
in
household
time
they could not give required
time
for the
important
things. In my point of view
children
should do
house
hold
chores
in the extra
time
after completing major work.
In the
end
,
household
chores
is
also
important
as
studying
and
playing
,
but
with respect to the
time
, we should know what is necessity to the
children
.
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47Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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