Nowadays, in the world a lot of events are happening and plenty of them never affect our daily life. The news reporters and journalists effort to show these events vital, but is it important to people to know about these events happening around the world or not? I rather disagree with the statement.
First, today people are busy and they have no time to spend their little time for knowing all or even part of events of the world. The amount of these events are huge and lots of them are not important to people. In the modern life people have to work hard to providing the requirements of their life and they are not able to waste their free time to knowing about news of the world. For example in my country the most important thing for persons in the life is preparing a good life for their family and spending time with family or friends. Thus, it is not important to people to know about events happening in the world.
Second, the most of news around the world are about bad events such as wars, natural disasters, accidents, conflicts of countries and political issues and they make life boring and tragic. It might be true that people can get a lot of experiences and be aware with watching these news but the events of the world is not usefulness for people and that is only gathering massive amount of information which are contain bad and painful news. Knowing these news only makes people sad and depress so there is no importance for hearing them. In this complex life people are not interested in the news and the time of parade of newspapers passed over. People do not trust to news resources and sites and this is another reason that people think knowing about events happening around the world is not important for them.
To put it in a nutshell, people now are aware which things have benefit for them and they learned to live super-efficient to having a good and pleasure life knowing about news of the world is not preference to them. Touchable events could be more important for people not knowing about them.
Nowadays, in the
world
a lot of
events
are
happening
and
plenty
of them never affect our daily
life
. The
news
reporters and journalists effort to
show
these
events
vital,
but
is it
important
to
people
to know about these
events
happening
around the
world
or not? I
rather
disagree with the statement.
First
,
today
people
are
busy and
they have no
time
to spend their
little
time
for
knowing
all or even part of
events
of the
world
. The amount of these
events
are huge and lots of them are not
important
to
people
. In the modern
life
people
have to
work
hard
to providing the requirements of their
life and
they are not able to waste their free
time
to
knowing
about
news
of the
world
.
For example
in my country the most
important
thing for persons in the
life
is preparing a
good
life
for their family and spending
time
with family or friends.
Thus
, it is not
important
to
people
to know about
events
happening
in the world.
Second, the most of
news
around the
world
are about
bad
events
such as wars, natural disasters, accidents, conflicts of countries and political
issues and
they
make
life
boring and tragic. It might be true that
people
can
get
a lot of
experiences and be aware with watching these
news
but
the
events
of the
world
is not usefulness for
people
and
that is
only
gathering massive amount of information which are
contain
bad
and painful
news
.
Knowing
these
news
only
makes
people
sad and depress
so
there is no importance for hearing them. In this complex
life
people
are not interested in the
news
and the
time
of parade of newspapers passed over.
People
do not trust to
news
resources and sites and this is another reason that
people
think
knowing
about
events
happening
around the
world
is not
important
for them.
To put it in a nutshell,
people
now
are aware which things have benefit for
them and
they learned to
live
super-efficient to having a
good
and pleasure
life
knowing
about
news
of the
world
is not preference to them. Touchable
events
could be more
important
for
people
not
knowing
about them.
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69Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes