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Do u agree or disagree for providing university tuition fee-free to scholars. Explains with reasons and examples to support your answers. v.2

Do u agree or disagree for providing university tuition fee-free to scholars. Explains with reasons and examples to support your answers. v. 2
Education holds a basic human right that everybody deserves and it helps in creating a better world. There are various views about providing the student' s tuition fee-free at university. I am of the opinion that learning should be free of charge to all enthusiastic scholars. Accordingly, the next paragraphs will vastly elucidate reasons. To begin with, education plays a crucial role in our lives. Several reasons lie hidden that most people cannot proceed with their education after school even if they have the potential and interest. The main reason behind this is the high tuition expense. So, if all the university provides pupils with no tuition fee, and then they can further continue their education. Taking my friend, for example, my childhood buddy, she was excellent in her academics and she indeed topped the twelfth-grade but due to her poor family background, she couldn' t afford the university level education. As a result, she started doing a job to help her family. This example demonstrates how poverty can impede a career despite being the ablest scholar. Hence, I strongly consider the point of allowing scholars free of the tuition fee. Secondly, it can create awareness among the younger generation about the significance of education. Students can encourage and learn from each other. More and more people would obtain education at the university level and there would be a better society. Consequently, the world which we know would be more satisfying and a lesser unemployment problem. For instance, developed countries like the united states, Canada, most of the native population are qualified and well-educated, therefore, the unemployment rate is much lower and better living standard as compared to other countries. This example illustrates the importance of free education for a more desirable standard of living and a better world. To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that I believe that providing university education for free would be a great idea to giving chance to scholars who cannot afford and also promotes transforming our nation with lesser problems.
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holds a basic human right that everybody deserves and it
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helps
in creating a
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better
world. There are various views about providing the
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student&
#039; s tuition fee-free at
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university
. I am of the opinion that learning should be
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free
of charge to all enthusiastic
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scholars
.
Accordingly
, the
next
paragraphs will
vastly
elucidate reasons.

To
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begin
with,
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education
plays a crucial role in our
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lives
. Several reasons lie hidden that most
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people
cannot proceed with their
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education
after school even if they have the potential and interest. The main reason behind this is the high tuition expense.
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So
, if all the
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university
provides pupils with no tuition fee, and then they can
further
continue their
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education
. Taking my friend,
for example
, my childhood buddy, she was excellent in her
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academics and
she
indeed
topped the twelfth-grade
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but
due to her poor family background, she
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couldn&
#039; t afford the
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university
level
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education
.
As a result
, she
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started
doing a job to
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help
her family. This example demonstrates how poverty can impede a career despite being the ablest
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scholar
.
Hence
, I
strongly
consider the point of allowing
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scholars
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free
of the tuition fee.

Secondly
, it can create awareness among the younger generation about the significance of
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education
. Students can encourage and learn from each other. More and more
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people
would obtain
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education
at the
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university
level and there would be a
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better
society.
Consequently
, the world which we know would be more satisfying and a lesser unemployment problem.
For instance
,
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developed countries
like the
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united states
, Canada, most of the native population
are qualified
and well-educated,
therefore
, the unemployment rate is much lower and
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better
living standard as compared to other countries. This example illustrates the importance of
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free
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education
for a more desirable standard of living and a
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better
world.

To sum up, this conclusion could
be drawn
that I believe that providing
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university
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education
for
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free
would be a great
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idea
to giving chance to
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scholars
who cannot afford and
also
promotes transforming our nation with lesser problems.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Do u agree or disagree for providing university tuition fee-free to scholars. Explains with reasons and examples to support your answers. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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