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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? v.7

Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? v. 7
It is a common technique using chemicals in the sustenance's preservation and manufacturing. This essay will explain whether it is harmful or necessary, supporting by its compelling. In the modern life, many people prefer eating fast or frozen food. Thus, the companies can worry about the sustenance's fresh, and they can choose to continue it via some chemicals. For example, if we can add some more salt in our meals, its adverse influence has emerged. However, if we cannot use these salt or any supplements in the fabricate zone, our food would be toxic. Although, many of supplements have some detrimental effects when they are consumed for a long time. Therefore, the government or the health ministry authorities should some visiting the companies in order to enable safety for public health. On the other hand, the government should take control its production chain. Due to the fact that, no one can not use fake or harmful chemicals in the food. Also, the people should be aware of more consuming these types of food detrimental and carcinogen effects. For instance, television programmes call for some medical doctors in their show in order to educate the society. If the people take importance their advice and balance of the diet, eating habits can change in a good way. When they do not purchase these types of sustenance every time, nobody can not affect in terms of adverse effects of the preserved chemicals. In conclusion, I restate that even if many individuals alter the food habits as the fast or frozen food, when they have a balanced diet programme related to educated, all the people can stay healthy. Admittedly, in our decade, we need these type of food using its benefits without over consuming. In the last words, we can preserve our body with being conscious about what we buy as a meal.
It is a common technique using chemicals in the sustenance's preservation and manufacturing. This essay will
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explain
whether it is harmful or necessary, supporting by its compelling.

In the modern life,
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many
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people
prefer eating
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fast
or frozen
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food
.
Thus
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
can worry about the sustenance's fresh, and they can choose to continue it via
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some
chemicals.
For example
, if we can
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add
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some
more salt in our meals, its adverse influence has emerged.
However
, if we cannot
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use
these salt or any supplements in
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the fabricate
zone, our
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food
would be toxic. Although,
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many
of supplements have
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some
detrimental effects when they
are consumed
for a long time.
Therefore
, the
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government
or the health ministry authorities should
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
visiting the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
in order to enable safety for public health.

On the other hand
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should take control its production chain. Due to the fact that, no one can not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
fake or harmful chemicals in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
Also
, the
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people
should be aware of more consuming these types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
detrimental and carcinogen effects.
For instance
, television
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programmes
call for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
medical doctors in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
in order to educate the society. If the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
take importance their advice and balance of the diet, eating habits can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way. When they do not
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purchase
these types of sustenance every time, nobody can not
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affect
in terms of adverse effects of the preserved chemicals.

In conclusion
, I restate that even if
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many
individuals alter the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
habits as the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
or frozen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
, when they have a balanced diet
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme related
to educated, all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can stay healthy.
Admittedly
, in our decade, we need these type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
using its benefits without over consuming. In the last words, we can preserve our body with being conscious about what we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
as a meal.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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