There is often a debate among people, whether it is advantageous to live in a house or an apartment. This essay explains why I believe the drawbacks of living in a house are outweighed by the benefits compared to living in an apartment.
Considering firstly the negatives of houses, the most important one is that they tend to be less secure. For example, most houses do not have a security guard or CCTV cameras to guard them and also, houses are typically one or two storeys high. This can be a problem as it is easy for the burglars to break in. On the other hand, apartments usually are more secure as they are guarded by security guards, surveillance cameras and other forms of criminal deterrence.
However, the main advantages of living in a house are they are usually more spacious and more private. With regards to the former, houses generally have a number of rooms, which can be useful for families with children, to relax and spend their leisure time. As for the latter, houses are typically built far from each other, which can prevent noise from carrying to the neighbouring residents. For instance, children in a family might require separate rooms to study, which can be possible by having more rooms. In contrast, apartments usually have lesser rooms and the residents also stay in close proximity to each other.
In conclusion, I believe the advantages of space and privacy provided by houses outweigh the disadvantages of security when compared with the flats.
There is
often
a debate among
people
, whether it is advantageous to
live
in a
house
or an apartment. This essay
explains
why I believe the drawbacks of living in a
house
are outweighed
by the benefits compared to living in an apartment.
Considering
firstly
the negatives of
houses
, the most
important
one is that they tend to be less secure.
For example
, most
houses
do not have a security guard or CCTV cameras to guard them and
also
,
houses
are
typically
one or two
storeys
high. This can be a problem as it is easy for the burglars to break in.
On the other hand
, apartments
usually are
more secure as they
are guarded
by security guards, surveillance cameras and other forms of criminal deterrence.
However
, the main advantages of living in a
house
are they are
usually
more spacious and more private.
With regards to
the former,
houses
generally
have a number of
rooms
, which can be useful for families with children, to relax and spend their leisure time. As for the latter,
houses
are
typically
built far from each other, which can
prevent
noise from carrying to the
neighbouring
residents.
For instance
, children in a family might require separate
rooms
to study, which can be possible by having more
rooms
.
In contrast
, apartments
usually
have lesser
rooms
and the residents
also
stay in
close proximity
to each other.
In conclusion
, I believe the advantages of space and privacy provided by
houses
outweigh the disadvantages of security when compared with the flats.
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