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Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answers and include examp v.2

Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. with this opinion? 2
Advances in technology have made it easier than ever before to reach and interact with people around the world. However, does this mean that it is also easier to connect and form meaningful relationships with others? In this essay, I will argue that while digital communication may be easy and convenient, it is no substitute for face-to-face communication. Compared to the past, it is now easier, cheaper and more convenient to communicate with people, wherever they may be. Technologies such as instant messaging, email, or VOIP (e. g. Skype) have transformed the ways in which we communicate with each other. Thirty years ago, getting in touch with someone in a different country was difficult and frequently expensive. Today, I can take my phone out of my pocket and contact people all over the world at the push of a button. While technology may have made it easier for people to communicate, it has not improved connections and relationships between people in any meaningful way. Email, instant messaging software or social media websites can never replace face-to-face contact, because so much communication is non-verbal. We rely on body language, facial expressions and other subtle cues to understand others. In a text message or an email, or even with video chat, those signals are lost. Connection between people depends on true communication, and true communication is only possible when people talk face-to-face. Digital technology has undoubtedly changed how we communicate, and in many ways this is a positive thing. Being able to keep in touch with friends and family in other cities or countries is a great advantage. However, the ways in which we connect and form relationships have not changed substantively; we need face-to-face contact to form meaningful connections with others, and current technology is no substitute for that.
Advances in
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technology
have made it
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easier
than ever
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before
to reach and interact with
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people
around the world.
However
, does this mean that it is
also
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easier
to connect and form meaningful relationships with others? In this essay, I will argue that while digital
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communication
may be easy and convenient, it is no substitute for face-to-face communication.

Compared to the past, it is
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now
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easier
, cheaper and more convenient to
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communicate
with
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people
, wherever they may be.
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Technologies
such as instant messaging, email, or
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VOIP
(
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e. g.
Skype) have transformed the
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ways
in which we
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communicate
with each
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other
. Thirty years ago, getting in touch with someone in a
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different
country was difficult and
frequently
expensive.
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Today
, I can take my phone out of my pocket and contact
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people
all over the world at the push of a button.

While
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technology
may have made it
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easier
for
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people
to
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communicate
, it has not
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improved
connections and relationships between
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people
in any meaningful
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way
. Email, instant messaging software or social media websites can never replace face-to-face contact,
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because
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so
much
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communication
is non-verbal. We rely on body language, facial expressions and
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other
subtle cues to understand others. In a text message or an email, or even with video chat, those signals
are lost
.
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Connection between
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people
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depends
on true
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communication
, and true
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communication
is
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only
possible when
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people
talk face-to-face.

Digital
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technology
has
undoubtedly
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changed
how we
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communicate
, and in
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many
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ways
this is a
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positive
thing. Being able to
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keep
in touch with friends and family in
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other
cities or countries is a great advantage.
However
, the
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ways
in which we connect and form relationships have not
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changed
substantively
; we need face-to-face contact to form meaningful connections with others, and
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current
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technology
is no substitute for that.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. with this opinion? 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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