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Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answers and include examp v.1

Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. with this opinion? 1
Occupations will be done by machines such as Artificially intelligent robots in the future. It is possible that unskilled jobs may finally be done by robots, while some other jobs which require expertise and experience will be taken over by individuals. This essay shall discuss why some jobs are going to rely on humans rather than robots. Robots may eventually substitute all human labour that does not need any talent or complex human skills. Numerous companies will be addicted to intelligent robots because not only can robots be significantly beneficial in terms of finances, but also time-consuming. In supermarkets, for instance, countless cashiers have been replaced by automated systems that cost enormously less than employees and it works much quicker than humans without being exhausted. Besides, these devices require no vacation and most importantly no holiday pay. For these reasons, machines and intelligent robots will be involved in people's lives more frequently in the future. On the other hand, some specific workforces cannot be replaced because technology and machines will never achieve the capacity to do them since they require 'human touch'. For instance, psychology, medicine, and education will need the expertise and study. Robots will never be able to achieve what has taken thousands of years of study, research and experiment from explorers and experts who sacrificed their lives in the battle of science. To sum up, it appears to be that infinite menial jobs will be taken by robots. However, sophisticated jobs that require human skills, experience and science will always exist. Ultimately, I am inclined to believe that jobs that are expertly done by humans may not be correctly done by machines.
Occupations will
be done
by
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machines
such as
Artificially
intelligent robots in the future. It is possible that unskilled
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jobs
may
finally
be done
by robots, while
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some
other
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jobs
which
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require
expertise and experience will
be taken
over by individuals. This essay shall discuss why
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some
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jobs
are going to rely on
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humans
rather
than robots.

Robots may
eventually
substitute all
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human
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labour
that does not need any talent or complex
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human
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skills
. Numerous
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companies
will
be addicted
to intelligent robots
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because
not
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only
can robots be
significantly
beneficial in terms of finances,
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but
also
time-consuming. In supermarkets,
for instance
, countless cashiers have
been replaced
by automated systems that cost
enormously
less than employees and it works much quicker than
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humans
without
being exhausted
.
Besides
, these devices
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require
no vacation and most
importantly
no holiday pay. For these reasons,
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machines
and intelligent robots will
be involved
in
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people
's
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lives
more
frequently
in the future.

On the other hand
,
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some
specific
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workforces
cannot
be replaced
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because
technology and
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machines
will never achieve the capacity to do them since they
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require
'human touch'.
For instance
, psychology, medicine, and education will need the expertise and study. Robots will never be able to achieve what has taken thousands of years of study, research and experiment from explorers and experts who sacrificed their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in the battle of science.

To sum up, it appears to be that infinite menial
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jobs
will
be taken
by robots.
However
, sophisticated
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jobs
that
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require
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human
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skills
, experience and science will always exist.
Ultimately
, I
am inclined
to believe that
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jobs
that are
expertly
done by
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humans
may not be
correctly
done by
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machines
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. with this opinion? 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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