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Destruction of the world’s forests can result in the death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Destruction of the world’s forests can result in the death of the world we currently know. v. 2
It is argued that the demise of the earth we know today can be resulted by deforestation. I completely agree that excessive tree excision can lead to the earth's destruction. This essay will talk about the reasons why the above is true. To begin with, forests have the earth's biggest supply of oxygen essential for all living and non living creatures. If oxygen stock shrinks, first, human and animals will eventually run out of air to breath and at the end may suffocate, second, all natural processes such as rain will ultimately as well stop, thus resulting in the large scale destruction of the earth. For instance, a recent podcast by CNN talked about the diminishing supply of oxygen and its inevitable effects on our earth. Moreover, it also stated that the destructive impacts had been seen in several Asian countries, such as India, where it is drought season all year long and rain only falls approximately 47 hours in 2018 as opposed to 132 hours a decade earlier. Trees also have the ability to recycle and reduce the abundant carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. The surplus amount of this gas will result in a dome covering the earth's atmosphere being formed and prevent sunlight from reflecting back to the sky, thus trapping the heat inside and make the earth warmer. This may result in several disasters like forest fires. The Amazon is an evident example of this. Just recently, it is reported that one third of the forest was burnt and the UN has confirmed that the cause is indeed the rising temperature of the earth that caused it to get over heat and eventually on fire. In conclusion, I support that earth's gradual demise is mainly caused by widespread trees excision. Firstly, the oxygen the world needs for its natural processes will lose its primary producer and secondly, carbon dioxide will lose natural recycling tools.
It
is argued
that the demise of the
earth
we know
today
can
be resulted
by deforestation. I completely
agree
that excessive tree excision can lead to the
earth's
destruction. This essay will talk about the reasons why the above is true.

To
begin
with, forests have the
earth's
biggest supply of oxygen essential for all living and
non living
creatures. If oxygen stock shrinks,
first
, human and animals will
eventually
run out of air to breath and at the
end
may suffocate, second, all natural processes such as rain will
ultimately
as well
stop
,
thus
resulting in the large scale destruction of the
earth
.
For instance
, a recent podcast by CNN talked about the diminishing supply of oxygen and its inevitable effects on our
earth
.
Moreover
, it
also
stated that the destructive impacts had been
seen
in several Asian countries, such as India, where it is drought season all year long and rain
only
falls approximately 47 hours in 2018 as opposed to 132 hours a decade earlier.

Trees
also
have the ability to recycle and
reduce
the abundant carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. The surplus amount of this gas will result in a dome covering the
earth's
atmosphere
being formed
and
prevent
sunlight from reflecting back to the sky,
thus
trapping the heat inside and
make
the
earth
warmer. This may result in several disasters like forest fires. The Amazon is an evident example of this.
Just
recently, it
is reported
that one third of the forest
was burnt
and the UN has confirmed that the cause is
indeed
the rising temperature of the
earth
that caused it to
get
over heat and
eventually
on fire.

In conclusion
, I support that
earth's
gradual demise is
mainly
caused by widespread trees excision.
Firstly
, the oxygen the world needs for its natural processes will lose its primary producer and
secondly
, carbon dioxide will lose natural recycling tools.
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IELTS essay Destruction of the world’s forests can result in the death of the world we currently know. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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