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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests can result in the death of the world we currently know. . To what extent do you agree or disagree? ? v.6

Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests can result in the death of the world we currently know. . ? v. 6
The effect of the deforestation which was always ab debatable issue. the substantial influence of cutting tree' s rapidly has sparked in controversy over the potential impact of the trend on whole globe in recent yearsw whilst some people claim that indirectly forest destruction will ruin our the present world. this essay will elobrate effects and reasons of deforestation and thus will lead to logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why deforestation cam result in death of the world but the most significant one step from the fact that is global warming. for instance, global warming rising then directly effect of humans, plants, animalsand natural things all are damaged. if life on earth it you continuous we must control cutting tree' s which creates gigantic disaster. secondly, the most prominent factor of human life. wild inhale carbon dioxide and exhale oxygen which is helpful for breathing and trees maintain the human structure. in this case, wild provides medicine, woods, fossil fuels which is beneficial for health as well as wealth. many natural fuels such as, coal, oil, wood etecetra are diminishing rapidly then it' s not far away when all will end and it will be badly our next generation. Morever, environmentalist research that in nowadays forest cutting is increasing rapidly and that time not far whenever all globe are destroying. In addition, if person continuous cutting tree' s then many fatal gases are coming then it harmful of their human health. forests are only one criteria which protect the harmful gases and leaved out Amy diseases such as ashtma, blood Cancer, heart attacks and so on. In conclusion, it is clearly said that environment play an crucial role in their life. i think government take an action to stop of cutting tree' s and destruction of forests.
The effect of the deforestation which was always ab debatable issue.
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the
substantial influence of
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cutting
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tree&
#039; s
rapidly
has sparked in controversy over the potential impact of the trend on whole globe in recent
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yearsw
whilst
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some
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people
claim that
indirectly
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forest
destruction will ruin our the present world.
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this
essay will
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elobrate
effects and reasons of deforestation and
thus
will lead to logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why deforestation cam result in death of the world
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but
the most significant one step from the fact
that is
global warming.
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for
instance, global warming rising then
directly
effect of
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humans
, plants,
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animalsand
natural things all
are damaged
.
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if
life on earth it you continuous we
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must
control
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cutting
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tree&
#039; s which creates gigantic disaster.
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secondly
, the most prominent factor of
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human
life.
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wild
inhale carbon dioxide and exhale oxygen which is helpful for breathing and
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trees
maintain the
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human
structure.
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in
this case, wild provides medicine, woods, fossil fuels which is beneficial for health
as well
as wealth.
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many
natural fuels such as, coal, oil, wood
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etecetra
are diminishing
rapidly
then
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it&
#039; s not far away when all will
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end
and it will be
badly
our
next
generation.
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Morever
, environmentalist research that
nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: "nowadays".
in nowadays
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forest
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cutting
is increasing
rapidly
and that time not far whenever all globe are destroying.

In addition
, if person continuous
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cutting
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tree&
#039; s then
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many
fatal gases are coming then
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it
harmful of their
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human
health.
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forests
are
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only
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one criteria
which protect the harmful gases and leaved out Amy diseases such as
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ashtma
, blood Cancer, heart attacks and
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so
on.

In conclusion
, it is
clearly
said that environment play
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an
crucial role in their life.
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i
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think
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government
take an action to
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stop
of
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cutting
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tree&
#039; s and destruction of
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forests
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Mistakes

IELTS essay Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests can result in the death of the world we currently know. . ? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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