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Describe an object you particularly like You should say What it is and what it looks like What it is made of What it is for And explain why it is special for you v.1

Describe an object you particularly like You should say What it is and what it looks like What it is made of What it is for And explain why it is special for you v. 1
Nowadays peoples try to learn many languages. Someone learns to have a rich vocabulary, others live or study in a foreign country. On the one hand, learning languages improve our speech and our horizon. Because when we learn language of one country, we get to know their culture and their habits. For example, I learn English and Spanish for two years, and I know everything about their country and their people. In Spain since ancient time preserved to sing Spanish songs with a guitar and wear their hat which is called "Sombrero". When I learnt English I find out about their English full breakfast which is so delicious and dense. This breakfast includes eggs, bacon, sausages, pudding, baked beans, tomatoes, mushrooms and a beverage such as coffee or tea. On the other hand, learning languages help to succeed our dream. Many people learn languages to pass exam and to study abroad. Older people want to learn languages to work in a foreign country. For example, in our time we have many offers from many countries, which is about study or work. And the key of their offer is to pass exams on their language. Besides that learning language helps to converse with other people who are not native speaker of your country. In my opinion, learning languages is much profitably, because when you know language you can work like an interpreter, and you have an opportunity to have friends in the other countries. To sum up, all of this being said, I believe that learning a different language should be not only for physical needs, like money, but also our moral needs, because never before had such a big thirst for knowledge been displayed.
Nowadays
peoples
try to
learn
many
languages
. Someone
learns
to have a rich vocabulary, others
live
or study in a foreign country.

On the one hand,
learning
languages
improve
our speech and our horizon.
Because
when we
learn
language
of one
country
, we
get
to know their culture and their habits.
For example
, I
learn
English and Spanish for two years, and I know everything about their
country
and their
people
. In Spain since ancient time preserved to sing Spanish songs with a guitar and wear their hat which
is called
"
Sombrero
"
. When I
learnt
English I find out about their English full breakfast which is
so
delicious and dense. This breakfast includes eggs, bacon, sausages, pudding, baked beans, tomatoes, mushrooms and a beverage such as coffee or tea.

On the
other
hand,
learning
languages
help
to succeed our dream.
Many
people
learn
languages
to pass exam and to study abroad. Older
people
want to
learn
languages
to work in a foreign
country
.
For example
, in our time we have
many
offers from
many
countries
, which is about study or work. And the key of their offer is to pass exams on their language.

Besides
that
learning
language
helps
to converse with
other
people
who are not native speaker of your
country
. In my opinion,
learning
languages
is much
profitably
,
because
when you know
language
you can work like an interpreter, and you have an opportunity to have friends in the
other
countries.

To sum up, all of this
being said
, I believe that
learning
a
different
language
should be not
only
for physical needs, like money,
but
also
our moral needs,
because
never
before
had such a
big
thirst for knowledge
been displayed
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe an object you particularly like You should say What it is and what it looks like What it is made of What it is for And explain why it is special for you v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
284 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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