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Describe an object you particularly like You should say What it is and what it looks like What it is made of What it is for And explain why it is special for you v.1

Describe an object you particularly like You should say What it is and what it looks like What it is made of What it is for And explain why it is special for you v. 1
Nowadays peoples try to learn many languages. Someone learns to have a rich vocabulary, others live or study in a foreign country. On the one hand, learning languages improve our speech and our horizon. Because when we learn language of one country, we get to know their culture and their habits. For example, I learn English and Spanish for two years, and I know everything about their country and their people. In Spain since ancient time preserved to sing Spanish songs with a guitar and wear their hat which is called "Sombrero". When I learnt English I find out about their English full breakfast which is so delicious and dense. This breakfast includes eggs, bacon, sausages, pudding, baked beans, tomatoes, mushrooms and a beverage such as coffee or tea. On the other hand, learning languages help to succeed our dream. Many people learn languages to pass exam and to study abroad. Older people want to learn languages to work in a foreign country. For example, in our time we have many offers from many countries, which is about study or work. And the key of their offer is to pass exams on their language. Besides that learning language helps to converse with other people who are not native speaker of your country. In my opinion, learning languages is much profitably, because when you know language you can work like an interpreter, and you have an opportunity to have friends in the other countries. To sum up, all of this being said, I believe that learning a different language should be not only for physical needs, like money, but also our moral needs, because never before had such a big thirst for knowledge been displayed.
Nowadays
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learn
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many
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languages
. Someone
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learns
to have a rich vocabulary, others
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live
or study in a foreign country.

On the one hand,
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learning
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languages
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improve
our speech and our horizon.
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Because
when we
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learn
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language
of one
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country
, we
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get
to know their culture and their habits.
For example
, I
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learn
English and Spanish for two years, and I know everything about their
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country
and their
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people
. In Spain since ancient time preserved to sing Spanish songs with a guitar and wear their hat which
is called
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Sombrero
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. When I
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learnt
English I find out about their English full breakfast which is
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so
delicious and dense. This breakfast includes eggs, bacon, sausages, pudding, baked beans, tomatoes, mushrooms and a beverage such as coffee or tea.

On the
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other
hand,
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learning
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languages
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help
to succeed our dream.
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Many
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people
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learn
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languages
to pass exam and to study abroad. Older
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people
want to
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learn
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languages
to work in a foreign
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country
.
For example
, in our time we have
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many
offers from
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many
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countries
, which is about study or work. And the key of their offer is to pass exams on their language.

Besides
that
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learning
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language
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helps
to converse with
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other
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people
who are not native speaker of your
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country
. In my opinion,
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learning
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languages
is much
profitably
,
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because
when you know
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language
you can work like an interpreter, and you have an opportunity to have friends in the
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other
countries.

To sum up, all of this
being said
, I believe that
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learning
a
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different
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language
should be not
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only
for physical needs, like money,
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but
also
our moral needs,
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because
never
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before
had such a
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big
thirst for knowledge
been displayed
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Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay Describe an object you particularly like You should say What it is and what it looks like What it is made of What it is for And explain why it is special for you v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
284 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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