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A short, type written, couple of paragraphs, about the artist you want to write your analysis paper on. Why do you think this artist/artwork is important? v.1

A short, type written, couple of paragraphs, about the artist you want to write your analysis paper on. Why do you think this artist/artwork is important? v. 1
To start with, my analysis introduce why I select this picture and what do you think about this photography. I think that I didn' t live in this age and didn' t go through this period but photographs and other works of art, one can imagine how much people suffered during this period, including the pain, sadness, and suffering from poverty, as they indirectly experienced the past because I believe that the present can be seen in the past, and we are aware that these times can be repeated during the development of our society in the future But I cannot expect this tragedy should be repeated so, we need to have more interest with poverty problems. Also, I was analyzed with color, shape, line, movement, use of light and dark. In summarize my paper, this peace color is black and white but it appears a little red, this photograph show one people on the bed, and he looks like poor and the bed is made by wine container and blanket and wood board, wood walls and the brick walls are mainly made up of straight lines, two wine containers are shape by circle, man Lie down on the bed, but he usually looks front and photograph color usually show night light because It is basically a black-and-white photograph.
To
start
with, my analysis introduce why I select this picture and what do you
think
about this photography. I
think
that I
didn&
#039; t
live
in this age and
didn&
#039; t go through this period
but
photographs
and other works of art, one can imagine how much
people
suffered during this period, including the pain, sadness, and suffering from poverty, as they
indirectly
experienced the past
because
I believe that the present can be
seen
in the past, and we are aware that these times can
be repeated
during the development of our society in the future
But
I cannot
expect
this tragedy should
be repeated
so
, we need to have more interest with poverty problems.

Also
, I
was analyzed
with color, shape, line, movement,
use
of light and dark.

In summarize my paper, this peace color is black and white
but
it appears a
little
red, this
photograph
show
one
people
on the bed, and he looks like poor and the bed
is made
by wine container and blanket and wood board, wood walls and the brick walls are
mainly
made up of straight lines, two wine containers are shape by circle,
man
Lie down on the bed,
but
he
usually
looks front and
photograph
color
usually
show
night light
because
It is
basically
a black-and-white
photograph
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay A short, type written, couple of paragraphs, about the artist you want to write your analysis paper on. Why do you think this artist/artwork is important? v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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