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A good teacher should have some special qualities. which qualities do you think are necessary and why? v.1

A good teacher should have some special qualities. which qualities do you think are necessary and why? v. 1
Relationships are the greatest gift to the mankind. They bound to change with time between parents and children. Parents have a trivial role to play in their young one's life, especially, when they are transformed into adults. This essay will explain the role that can be played by the parents during this crucial stage. One essential part they can take is being a best friend. In other words, while the child enters into an adult phase, their psychological attributes change, so they need their parents to be their best buddies to adapt to this change. Furthermore, this is the stage where children want someone to listen to them and provide advice for their safe future. To illustrate, the Times recently reported that while a research was conducted to understand the reasons behind stressed adults, it was found that 90% of them are in such situation because they tend to keep secrets with their own parents as they are afraid of their reactions. Certainly, a parent can be one's close mate to resolve issues. Another important place they can take is being a Mentor. That is to say, parents are the best teachers, so they can be instrumental in bringing out the best in their children. Moreover, during the crucial phases of life when graduating or seeking for jobs, wise parents advices really help individuals to reach great heights, both professionally and personally. In India, for example, Priyanka Chopra became a great actress as her mother advised her to make right choices. Therefore, even if parents are busy, it is worthy to spend some time with children chase them to achieve goals. To Conclude, parenting is a great responsibility and both parents and children can be benefited when parents play proactive roles, especially during a child's adult life. It is my hope that there should be a harmony between every parent and child.
Relationships are the greatest gift to the mankind. They bound to
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change
with time between
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parents
and
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children
.
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Parents
have a trivial role to play in their young one's life,
especially
, when they
are transformed
into
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adults
. This essay will
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explain
the role that can
be played
by the
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parents
during this crucial stage.

One essential part they can take is being
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a
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best
friend.
In other words
, while the child enters into an adult phase, their psychological attributes
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change
,
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so
they need their
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parents
to be their
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best
buddies to adapt to this
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change
.
Furthermore
, this is the stage where
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children
want someone to listen to them and provide advice for their safe future. To illustrate, the Times recently reported that while
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a research
was conducted
to understand the reasons behind
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stressed
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adults
, it
was found
that 90% of them are in such situation
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because
they tend to
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keep
secrets with their
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own
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parents
as they are afraid of their reactions.
Certainly
, a
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parent
can be one's close mate to resolve issues.

Another
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important
place they can take is being a Mentor.
That is
to say,
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parents
are the
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best
teachers,
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so
they can be instrumental in bringing out the
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best
in their
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children
.
Moreover
, during the crucial phases of life when graduating or seeking for jobs, wise
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parents
advices
really
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help
individuals to reach great heights, both
professionally
and
personally
. In India,
for example
, Priyanka Chopra became a great actress as her mother advised her to
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make
right choices.
Therefore
, even if
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parents
are busy, it is worthy to spend
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some
time with
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children
chase them to achieve goals.

To Conclude
, parenting is a great responsibility and both
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parents
and
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children
can
be benefited
when
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parents
play proactive roles,
especially
during a child's adult life. It is my hope that there should be a harmony between every
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parent
and child.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay A good teacher should have some special qualities. which qualities do you think are necessary and why? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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