Nowadays, many young people are leaving their homes for better education and work. In India, the villages are not much developed as compared to the cities, life in the villages is slow. As a result of which, people are not able to receive benefits of new technology and improve their lifestyle. This essay will discuss the main reasons of migration of the young people from rural areas to the urban areas.
Education plays an important role in this, even though there are many government schools available in the villages, the students are not able to receive good education. Most of the teachers are not qualified to teach the students, they were appointed as an outcome of corruption. The education system is affected when politicians start to interfere with it. For instance, in a recent survey conducted by a private organization, only 18% of the teachers are well qualified to teach.
Employment is the other reason of migration of young people. In the modern world, money plays a vital role in the survival and we need it for almost everything. There are not many resources in the villages and the educated members forced to migrate to the cities for a better life. In the urban areas, they are able to live a better life, but they are living away from their family and friends.
To sum up, according to me it is necessary for the youngsters to migrate to urban areas, as the government is not able to improve the conditions in the villages. The only disadvantage is that they are forced to live away from their near and dear ones, but they are able to help them financially and improve their lifestyle.
Nowadays,
many
young
people
are leaving their homes for better education and work. In India, the
villages
are not much developed as compared to the cities, life in the
villages
is slow.
As a result
of which,
people
are not
able
to receive benefits of new technology and
improve
their lifestyle. This essay will discuss the main reasons of migration of the young
people
from rural areas to the urban areas.
Education plays an
important
role in this,
even though
there are
many
government
schools available in the
villages
, the students are not
able
to receive
good
education. Most of the teachers are not qualified to teach the students, they
were appointed
as an outcome of corruption. The education system is
affected
when politicians
start
to interfere with it.
For instance
, in a recent survey conducted by a private organization,
only
18% of the teachers are well qualified to teach.
Employment is the other reason of migration of young
people
. In the modern world, money plays a vital role in the
survival and
we need it for almost everything. There are not
many
resources in the
villages
and the educated members forced to migrate to the cities for a better life. In the urban areas, they are
able
to
live
a better life,
but
they are living away from their family and friends.
To sum up, according to me it is necessary for the youngsters to migrate to urban areas, as the
government
is not
able
to
improve
the conditions in the
villages
. The
only
disadvantage is that they
are forced
to
live
away from their near and dear ones,
but
they are
able
to
help
them
financially
and
improve
their lifestyle.
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