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Describe a lake, a river or a sea you havevisited. You should say: Where the lake, river or sea isHow often you have visited itWhat activities you do thereExplain why you like this particular place. v.1

Describe a lake, a river or a sea you havevisited. You should say: Where the lake, river or sea isHow often you have visited itWhat activities you do thereExplain why you like this particular place. v. 1
In the era where everyone believes in a saying "Time is money", rushing for every task is common. And during this, it is difficult to maintain the tidiness in ones home as well as workplace and keep each and everything organized. Some believe that maintaining tidiness and keeping things organized is a waste of age and energy. While I think it is not at all a waste of an hour if it is something then hour saving. At skimming of this phenomenon, it looks useless and not productive, but once you probe into it, it is definitely worth considering. Let's take a closer look on the topic to get a solution. My opinion is discussed further. Firstly, cleanliness in the home or workplace gives you the positive vibes. To perform any task, a perfect atmosphere around you is as necessary as God in the temple. Without tidiness around you, you feel anxious and disgusting which affects your work. For example, if you are living around, in a mess, then there is a greater chance that you will get sick. Further, this sickness will lead you to hospitals and treatments, and that will cost you more hour plus money. So your time saving idea will be a flop. Moreover, putting something back in its correct location is also useful. Since, the thing is in its correct place, it will take just a second for you to find it when it is needed. In addition, there is an adage in Hinduism which says "Swachta Tyan Prabhuta", meaning "Cleanliness is where God is". So, not for you then do it for God. In contrast, some say it is not worthy to put so much effort in keeping everything clean when you can make your day to day work in that span. However, these operations do not take much longer. Do they? They are so simple and take very little effort. It is not a Rocket science to clean your house and keep things in their appropriate place. In conclusion, if you are thinking of nurturing yourself by making progress in your personal as well as professional life, then it is best in your interest to maintain cleanliness around you with arranging objects in their perfect position. Since, the main objective is to save time and money, this is the task you should perform as the first thing in the morning.
In the era where everyone believes in a saying
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Time is money
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, rushing for every task is common. And during this, it is difficult to maintain the tidiness in
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ones
home
as well
as workplace and
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keep
each and everything organized.
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Some
believe that maintaining tidiness and keeping things organized is a waste of age and energy. While I
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think
it is not at all a waste of an hour if it is something then hour saving. At skimming of this phenomenon, it looks useless and not productive,
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but
once you probe into it, it is definitely worth considering.
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Let
's take a closer look on the topic to
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get
a solution. My opinion
is discussed
further
.

Firstly
, cleanliness in the home or workplace gives you the
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positive
vibes. To perform any task, a perfect atmosphere
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around
you is as necessary as God in the temple. Without tidiness
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around
you, you feel anxious and disgusting which affects your work.
For example
, if you are living
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around
, in a mess, then there is a greater chance that you will
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get
sick.
Further
, this sickness will lead you to hospitals and treatments, and that will cost you more hour plus money.
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So
your time saving
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idea
will be a flop.
Moreover
, putting something back in its correct location is
also
useful. Since, the thing is in its correct place, it will take
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just
a second for you to find it when it
is needed
.
In addition
, there is an adage in Hinduism which says
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Swachta
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Tyan
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Prabhuta
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, meaning
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"
Cleanliness is where God is
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.
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So
, not for you then do it for God.

In contrast
,
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some
say it is not worthy to put
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so
much effort in keeping everything clean when you can
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make
your
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day to day
work in that span.
However
, these operations do not take much longer. Do they? They are
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so
simple and take
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very
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little
effort. It is not a Rocket science to clean your
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house
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
things in their appropriate place.

In conclusion
, if you are thinking of nurturing yourself by making progress in your personal
as well
as professional life, then it is best in your interest to maintain cleanliness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
around
you with arranging objects in their perfect position. Since, the main objective is to save time and money, this is the task you should perform as the
first
thing in the morning.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe a lake, a river or a sea you havevisited. You should say: Where the lake, river or sea isHow often you have visited itWhat activities you do thereExplain why you like this particular place. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
397 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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