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Describe a software that you often use You should say what it is what you use it for what benefits it brings to you and explain why this is an important software for you v.1

Describe a software that you often use You should say what it is what you use it for what benefits it brings to you and explain why this is an important software for you v. 1
In general, nutrition plays an important role in people's lives. Everyone cares very much about it and there are different type of the comfort foods for everyone. The need for food these days is very high. Maybe, the reasons are the rapid increase in the number of people. Therefore, great emphasis is placed on the comfort of eating. In short, there are many types of food in life, for example fast food, homemade foods, delectable foods and others. People choose these foods for themselves and do it their way of life. A person who eats the food that is comfortable for him or her walks all day long calm and cheerful. The advantage of easy dining is that people enjoy eating what they like. We can also add healthy meals to your meals which is something that everyone will enjoy. Eating well is a major part of our lives, because we need to eat to survive. No doubt, some foods that people find comfortable, maybe harmful them and can have a detrimental effect on their health. As we know, there are foods that are harmful to human health. Unfortunately, some people enjoy harmful foods and have incorporated them into their lifestyle. Eating unhealthy foods will have a detrimental effect on your health in the future. Currently, most people are suffering, from a number of diseases related to food poisoning and malnutrition. Clearly, many people have incarporated harmful foods into their eating habits In conclusion, we have seen the pros and cons of eating well when people put their healthy foods in the rhythm of eating their health will not be effected
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many
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food
in life,
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fast
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food
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, delectable
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foods
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choose these
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foods
for themselves and do it their way of life. A person who eats the
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food
that is
comfortable for him or her walks all day long calm and cheerful. The advantage of easy dining is that
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people
enjoy
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eating
what they like. We can
also
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add
healthy meals to your meals which is something that everyone will enjoy.
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well is a major part of our
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lives
,
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we need to eat to survive.

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foods
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them and can have a detrimental effect on their
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health
. As we know, there are
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foods
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harmful
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health
. Unfortunately,
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some
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people
enjoy
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foods
and have incorporated them into their lifestyle.
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unhealthy
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foods
will have a detrimental effect on your
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health
in the future.
Currently
, most
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people
are suffering, from a number of diseases related to
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food
poisoning and malnutrition.
Clearly
,
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many
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people
have
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incarporated
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harmful
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foods
into their
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eating
habits

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, we have
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will not
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Describe a software that you often use You should say what it is what you use it for what benefits it brings to you and explain why this is an important software for you v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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