According to the statistics, girls and boys make different choices about their studies. Females tend to prefer arts instead males choose scientific subjects. I think there are many reasons to explain this trend, to give an example still in many areas around the world some jobs, like an engineer or scientist are considered men's jobs. In my opinion is important understand reasons behind these choices. This trend should change if it doesn't represent the real interest of students. The most significant thing is encouraging boys and girls to study what they really like.
Males and females prefer to study different things in agreement to the studies. These choices depend on the future job. In many countries, there still is a separation between females and males careers. A girl chooses art because knows that in the future probably she will not work because in many countries earning money is the man's task and art not ensure a certain career.
Someone could link these preferences to psychologists aspects, but I think that is a division made on gender stereotypes that are incorrect and not consider the real personality. This trend should be analysed. Is important to understand what push girls and boys to certain choices. Is important answer to both of gender same possibilities for the future. Teachers have to show to students all courses they have.
To conclude, boys and girls study different things for many reasons, but, especially in poorer countries, the choice is closely connected with the future job. In my opinion, this tendency has to be accurately analysed and if it doesn't represent true inclinations and desires have to change.
According to the statistics,
girls
and
boys
make
different
choices
about their
studies
. Females tend to prefer arts
instead
males choose scientific subjects. I
think
there are
many
reasons to
explain
this trend, to give an example
still
in
many
areas around the world
some
jobs
, like an engineer or scientist
are considered
men
's
jobs
. In my opinion is
important
understand reasons behind these
choices
. This trend should
change
if it doesn't represent the real interest of students. The most significant thing is encouraging
boys
and
girls
to
study
what they
really
like.
Males and females prefer to
study
different
things in agreement to the
studies
. These
choices
depend on the
future
job
. In
many
countries, there
still
is a separation between females and males careers. A
girl
chooses art
because
knows that in the
future
probably
she will not work
because
in
many
countries earning money is the
man
's task and art not ensure a certain career.
Someone could link these preferences to psychologists aspects,
but
I
think
that is
a division made on gender stereotypes that are incorrect and not consider the real personality. This trend should be
analysed
. Is
important
to understand what push
girls
and
boys
to certain
choices
. Is
important
answer to both of gender same possibilities for the
future
. Teachers
have to
show
to students all courses they have.
To conclude
,
boys
and
girls
study
different
things for
many
reasons,
but
,
especially
in poorer countries, the
choice
is
closely
connected with the
future
job
. In my opinion, this tendency
has to
be
accurately
analysed
and if it doesn't represent true inclinations and desires
have to
change
.
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