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Describe a happy marriage you know. You should say: who they arehow you know themhow long they have been marriedand explain why you think they are happily married v.1

Describe a happy marriage you know. You should say: who they arehow you know themhow long they have been marriedand explain why you think they are happily married v. 1
It is true that only educator was a primary source of knowledge in the past. While in this modern age, advanced technologies are prevalently responsible for this task and most of the students get various sources of information on the basis of the internet. In my opinion technology cannot replace a teacher, regardless of advancement. To begin with, in the past era, students were unable to get ample supply of information regarding their realm and topic, so this is prevalently guided by teachers. Therefore, it does not mean that now, contemporary teachers are unnecessary in modern education. However, tutors are also enhancing their skills and qualifications as the same rate as gadgets. For instance, even a student can acquire knowledge from the internet, however, students would not be able to get the inspiration for successful career and life lessons without the air of a teacher. So, it is important that people realize the importance of the educators. Apart from that, modern teachers are well educated and conscientious applicants. Moreover, modern teachers not only Polish the mind of the student by digital method, but also let them understand the social and moral values. Furthermore, a new academic study is so complex and harder than past, so teachers play a significant role in comprehending the student each and every aspect of their studies. In addition, the teacher is one who is emotionally attached to his students and computer or other does not. In conclusion, the role of teachers in the learning process is still very important and I think it will continue to be in the future because no machine can replace the human interaction and its consequences
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educator was a primary source of knowledge in the past. While in this
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age, advanced technologies are
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prevalently
responsible for this task and most of the
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students
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various sources of information on the basis of the internet. In my opinion technology cannot replace a
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, regardless of advancement.

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with, in the past era,
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were unable to
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ample supply of information regarding their realm and topic,
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guided by
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.
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, it does not mean that
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, contemporary
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are unnecessary in
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modern
education.
However
, tutors are
also
enhancing their
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skills
and qualifications as the same rate as gadgets.
For instance
, even a
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student
can acquire knowledge from the internet,
however
,
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students
would not be able to
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get
the inspiration for successful career and life lessons without the air of a
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teacher
.
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, it is
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that
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realize the importance of the educators.

Apart from that,
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are
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well educated
and conscientious applicants.
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,
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not
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Polish the mind of the
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by digital method,
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also
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them understand the social and moral values.
Furthermore
, a new academic study is
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complex and harder than past,
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so
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teachers
play a significant role in comprehending the
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each and every aspect of their studies.
In addition
, the
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teacher
is one who is
emotionally
attached to his
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students
and computer or other does not.

In conclusion
, the role of
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teachers
in the learning process is
still
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and I
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it will continue to be in the future
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no machine can replace the human interaction and its consequences
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IELTS essay Describe a happy marriage you know. You should say: who they arehow you know themhow long they have been marriedand explain why you think they are happily married v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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