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. Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. You should say: Who they are How you knew them How long they have been married And explain why you think they have a happy marriage. v.1

. Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. You should say: Who they are How you knew them How long they have been married And explain why you think they have a happy marriage. v. 1
Spending free time right is the good rest. I assume that everyone wants to have sufficient free moment, because they simply would like to vacation. Firstly, there are a lot of benefits of spending leisure hours as not work. Secondly, if your vacation is long, you will rapidly become unproductive in a year. There are a lot of reasons why, but I will talk only about some of them. On the one hand, as I mentioned, you can just get the rest after hard-working day. It is a very obvious reason, but it has got permission to exist. Also, you can go for a walk with friends or alone to get some fresh air and maybe talk to people. Many people suppose that working at a free time is absurd, however, I think that If your deals are related to your hobby, you can enjoy working on that term. On the other hand, unless you do work as you laze, you will definitely become laze. In the most cases, people cannot control themselves and stop spending that moment. For example, some people, like myself, cannot stop watching Netflix or exciting films. Otherwise, your relax will not useful for you. You should have taught how to manage your hours before spending your spare present to waste. I recommend to read about stage management, especially in your near spare occasion. It can provide your understanding of correctly planning your affairs. In conclusion, there are a lot of both advantages and disadvantages, so each person should learn more about time management. Personally, I prefer to spend that moment learning new about English and improving knowledges of mathematics.
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Spending
free time right is the
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good
rest. I assume that everyone wants to have sufficient free moment,
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because
they
simply
would like to vacation.
Firstly
, there are
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a lot of
benefits of
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spending
leisure hours as not work.
Secondly
, if your vacation is long, you will
rapidly
become unproductive in a year. There are
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a lot of
reasons why,
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but
I will talk
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only
about
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of them.

On the one hand, as I mentioned, you can
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just
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get
the rest after
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hard
-working day. It is a
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very
obvious reason,
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but
it has
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permission to exist.
Also
, you can go for a walk with friends or alone to
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get
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some
fresh air and maybe talk to
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people
.
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Many
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people
suppose that working at a free time is absurd,
however
, I
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think
that If your deals
are related
to your hobby, you can enjoy working on that term.

On the other hand
, unless you do work as you laze, you will definitely become laze. In the most cases,
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people
cannot control themselves and
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stop
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spending
that moment.

For example
,
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some
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people
, like myself, cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
watching Netflix or exciting films.
Otherwise
, your relax will not useful for you. You should have taught how to manage your hours
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before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spending
your spare present to waste. I
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend reading".
recommend to read
about stage management,
especially
in your near spare occasion. It can provide your understanding of
correctly
planning your affairs.

In conclusion
, there are
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a lot of
both advantages and disadvantages,
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so
each person should learn more about time management.
Personally
, I prefer to spend that moment learning new about English and improving
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knowledges
of mathematics.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay . Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. You should say: Who they are How you knew them How long they have been married And explain why you think they have a happy marriage. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
274 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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