In order to effectively deal with stress on a frequent basis, experts in mental health have advised that we remain idle for some time. This essay will state why I disagree with this recommendation because not doing anything can affect our source of livelihood and also our well being.
Idleness can negatively affect our financial state. When people decide to abandon their jobs and businesses just because they are trying to avoid stress it impacts their source of income and in most cases they become impoverished. For instance, in Nigeria, out of the 85% of poor people 70% are jobless and without any form of livelihood. Further more, the state of poverty which they find themselves only succeeds in increasing their stress and not in anyway abating it.
Being inactive can also affect our health for the worst. Engaging in different forms of activities is also a form of exercise and this strengthens our bones and keep us physically fit and healthy. For example, a research conducted by the institute of general health and wellness in Nigeria has concluded that physical activity is the second most effective way to achieve a healthy life. Admittedly, we should not overdo it, however, from all indications as presented in the statistics it is obvious that living a life of inactivity is an invitation to illness.
To conclude, despite the fact that stress can be greatly reduced by taking things easy, I emphatically disagree with the psychologists that advised that this stressless way of life can only be achieved by doing nothing. 
In order to  
effectively
 deal with  
stress
 on a frequent basis, experts in mental health have advised that we remain idle for  
some
 time. This essay will state why I disagree with this recommendation  
because
 not doing anything can affect our source of livelihood and  
also
 our  
well being
.
Idleness can  
negatively
 affect our financial state. When  
people
 decide to abandon their jobs and businesses  
just
  because
 they are trying to avoid  
stress
 it impacts their source of income and  
in most cases
 they become impoverished.  
For instance
, in Nigeria, out of the 85% of poor  
people
 70% are jobless and without any form of livelihood.  
Further
 more, the state of poverty which they find themselves  
only
 succeeds in increasing their  
stress
 and not  
in anyway
 abating it.
Being inactive can  
also
 affect our health for the worst. Engaging in  
different
 forms of activities is  
also
 a form of exercise and this strengthens our bones and  
keep
 us  
physically
 fit and healthy.  
For example
,  
a research
 conducted by the institute of general health and wellness in Nigeria has concluded that physical activity is the second most effective way to achieve a healthy life.  
Admittedly
, we should not overdo it,  
however
, from all indications as presented in the statistics it is obvious that living a life of inactivity is an invitation to illness. 
To conclude
, despite the fact that  
stress
 can be  
greatly
  reduced
 by taking things easy, I  
emphatically
 disagree with the psychologists that advised that this  
stressless
 way of life can  
only
  be achieved
 by doing nothing. 
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