In our modern and stressful world, we often forget about our customs and traditions. The modern technologies and easy of digital entertainment have occurred even faster. However, I think that people should keep their traditions because they help to remember our forefathers and value the beautiful moments we have in our lives.
In my country, we have a great custom called "Maslenica". It is a holiday, which is celebrated at the end of the winter. Many people gather on the biggest square of the city and see of the winter. They say to the winter good-bye and ask the spring to change the winter. They celebrate the beginning of the life when everything starts to grow.
People on this holiday baked pancakes and treated each other with them. Also, many people gathered on the square and played different games. For example, the most well-known game "pulling a rope" subsists in that two teams pull a rope. The winner is the team would be whatever side has a longer rope. Other people crawl on the icy pole. People have fun at this holiday even if they just observe those games and do not participate.
In conclusion, I am sure that "Maslenica" would benefit many countries all over the world. People have the opportunity to relax, leave their troubles and worries behind and have fun. Also, this holiday helps people to find out more about each other, communicate and meet new people. In addition to those practical benefits, "Maslenica" helps people to slow down their life pace and enjoy the present moments that are irreplaceable and beautiful.
In our modern and stressful world, we
often
forget about our customs and traditions. The modern technologies and easy of digital entertainment have occurred even faster.
However
, I
think
that
people
should
keep
their traditions
because
they
help
to remember our forefathers and value the
beautiful
moments we have in our
lives
.
In my country, we have a great custom called
"
Maslenica
"
. It is a
holiday
, which
is celebrated
at the
end
of the
winter
.
Many
people
gather on the biggest square of the city and
see
of the
winter
. They say to the
winter
good
-bye and ask the spring to
change
the
winter
. They celebrate the beginning of the life when everything
starts
to grow.
People
on this
holiday
baked pancakes and treated each other with them.
Also
,
many
people
gathered on the square and played
different
games.
For example
, the most well-known game
"
pulling a rope
"
subsists in that two teams pull a rope. The winner is the team would be whatever side has a longer rope. Other
people
crawl on the icy pole.
People
have fun at this
holiday
even if they
just
observe those games and do not participate.
In conclusion
, I am sure that
"
Maslenica
"
would benefit
many
countries all over the world.
People
have the opportunity to relax,
leave
their troubles and worries behind and have fun.
Also
, this
holiday
helps
people
to find out more about each other, communicate and
meet
new
people
.
In addition
to those practical benefits,
"
Maslenica
"
helps
people
to slow down their life pace and enjoy the present moments that are irreplaceable and
beautiful
.
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes