Dancing plays an important role in a culture. v.2
Dancing plays an important role in a culture. v. 2
First of all, the reason why dancing of a particular country is so unique is because many art forms are put together. People need music, costumes, singers to perform, players and of cause dancers. Each of these art forms is unique and singular for every country. In old times people gathered to celebrate or mourn and every occasion had its own music and costumes. For example, ancient tribes painted their faces with ugly and strange patterns, put on colourful clothes and make strange movements around the fireplace.
Secondly, dancing is a combination of body movements that are peculiar to every nation. People of different nations have different bodily movements because dancing is one of the first means of communication. People differently express their feelings such as happiness, sadness, joy and sorrow through movements of their bodies. Every country has a different famous dancing style that represents its culture and custom. The traditional dancers wear dresses according to the country’s own heritage and this costume is a part of the tradition of the country too.
To sum up, I think that dancing keeps people's traditions alive through the ages.
First of all
, the reason why
dancing
of a particular
country
is
so
unique is
because
many
art forms
are put
together.
People
need music, costumes, singers to perform, players and
of cause
dancers. Each of these art forms is unique and singular for every
country
. In
old
times
people
gathered to celebrate or mourn and every occasion had its
own
music and costumes.
For example
, ancient tribes painted their faces with ugly and strange patterns, put on
colourful
clothes and
make
strange
movements
around the fireplace.
Secondly
,
dancing
is a combination of body
movements
that are peculiar to every nation.
People
of
different
nations have
different
bodily
movements
because
dancing
is one of the
first
means of communication.
People
differently
express their feelings such as happiness, sadness, joy and sorrow through
movements
of their bodies. Every
country
has a
different
famous
dancing
style that represents its culture and custom. The traditional dancers wear dresses according to the
country’s
own
heritage and this costume is a part of the tradition of the
country
too.
To sum up, I
think
that
dancing
keeps
people
's traditions alive through the ages.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes