People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? v.3
People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? v. 3
I think there are two types of people who do a job. The first types of people work for money primarily, and another type of people work for self-realization, to use their skills. I state my position on the following points.
First of all, people who work for self-realization like their job. Money is not important for them, they need satisfaction. I believe that this kind of people makes our evolution and history. They aspire after new inventions and discoveries overcoming all obstacles in their ways. I think that these people are very interesting because they know a lot, read many books and have their own life experience. Of course, they need money for some essential needs such as food and cloth, but they do not need them for luxury houses or expensive furnishings. Many scientists are people who devote their lives to new knowledge and discoveries. There are pieces of evidence of lots of opulent inventors and scientist who loves their work more than anything else and have devoted their lives to the work they loved. Their primary reason for working was their passion for the work.
Second of all, I believe that people need self-realization. It gives them the opportunity to contribute in world's history and share their knowledge and experience with other people. I think it helps them to realise that they are needed by humankind and will not be forgotten. This is priceless.
To sum up, I think that people's aspiration after self-realization is the main reason why we have now good medicine, different means of communications, many devices to make our lives easier, etc.
I
think
there are two types of
people
who
do a job. The
first
types of
people
work
for money
primarily
, and another type of
people
work
for self-realization, to
use
their
skills
. I state my position on the following points.
First of all
,
people
who
work
for self-realization like their job. Money is not
important
for them, they
need
satisfaction. I believe that this kind of
people
makes
our evolution and history. They aspire after new inventions and discoveries overcoming all obstacles in their ways. I
think
that these
people
are
very
interesting
because
they know a lot, read
many
books and have their
own
life experience.
Of course
, they
need
money for
some
essential
needs
such as food and cloth,
but
they do not
need
them for luxury
houses
or expensive furnishings.
Many
scientists are
people
who
devote their
lives
to new knowledge and discoveries. There are pieces of evidence of lots of opulent inventors and scientist
who
loves
their
work
more than anything else and have devoted their
lives
to the
work
they
loved
. Their primary reason for working was their passion for the work.
Second of all, I believe that
people
need
self-realization. It gives them the opportunity to contribute in world's history and share their knowledge and experience with other
people
. I
think
it
helps
them to
realise
that they
are needed
by humankind and will not
be forgotten
. This is priceless.
To sum up, I
think
that
people
's aspiration after self-realization is the main reason why we have
now
good
medicine,
different
means of communications,
many
devices to
make
our
lives
easier, etc.
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