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Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again. v.2

Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again. v. 2
since rapid and comfortable modes of transportation has come to an existence, bicycles has been put on back seat by folks. Even though riding bicycle has ample benefits, still people seems to be giving importance to other means of transportation over bicycle. This essay will examine the reason of declining use of bicycle with some suggestions to boost up the use of bicycle There are multifarious reason behind decreasing use of bicycle lately. First and foremost, It is next to impossible to cover long journeys in less time by using bicycle. Thus, people started using other fast modes of transportation in order to complete long journeys in no time. In addition, other modern means like as car, motorbike etc. are way too comfortable as compare to bicycle, this feature has led people to choose them as their main mode of transportation Further emphasizing on my point of views, in today' s cosmetic world, luxurious and other vehicle are considered as the status of symbol while use of bicycle is shame for some people. hence, this trend has encouraged people to change their mode of transport to other better available options instead of sticking with old fashioned bicycle. Furthermore, bicycle can transport maximum 2 people at one time where as other means of transport has plenty of space for a family to commute all together. Thence, people started forgetting bicycle as their main mean of transportation. Manifold steps can be taken in order to encourage people to use bicycle. To start with, government should run some campaigns which highlight the benefits of using bicycle and people with obesity ought to be made target so that they can attain benefits of using bicycle and keep themselves fit. Adding to it, people shell be made aware that how they are getting ripped of with the use of expansive cars and bikes for the rides which they can cover through bicycle To recapitulate, bicycle are very cheap to travel and key to stay fit on the same time. We cannot neglect the fact that modern means of transportation are quick and comfortable but lets not forget the unique benefits of using bicycle. Hence, possible journey' s should be made through bicycle
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since
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modes
of
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transportation
has
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come
to an existence,
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bicycles
has
been put
on back seat by folks.
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riding
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bicycle
has ample
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benefits
,
still
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people
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seems
to be giving importance to
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other
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means
of
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transportation
over
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bicycle
. This essay will examine the reason of declining
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use
of
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bicycle
with
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some
suggestions to boost up the
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use
of
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bicycle


There are multifarious reason behind decreasing
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use
of
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bicycle
lately.
First
and foremost, It is
next
to impossible to cover long journeys in less
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time
by using
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bicycle
.
Thus
,
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people
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started
using
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other
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fast
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modes
of
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transportation
in order to complete long journeys in no
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time
.
In addition
,
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other
modern
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means
like as car, motorbike etc. are way too comfortable as compare to
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bicycle
, this feature has led
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people
to choose them as their main
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mode
of
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transportation


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Further
emphasizing on my point of views, in
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today&
#039; s cosmetic world, luxurious and
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other
vehicle
are considered
as the status of symbol while
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use
of
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bicycle
is shame for
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some
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people
.
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hence
, this trend has encouraged
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people
to
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change
their
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mode
of transport to
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other
better available options
instead
of sticking with
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old fashioned
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bicycle
.
Furthermore
,
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bicycle
can transport maximum 2
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people
at one
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time where
as
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other
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means
of transport has
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plenty
of space for a family to commute all together. Thence,
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people
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started
forgetting
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bicycle
as their main
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mean
of transportation.

Manifold steps can
be taken
in order to encourage
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people
to
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use
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bicycle
. To
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start
with,
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government
should run
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some
campaigns which highlight the
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benefits
of using
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bicycle
and
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people
with obesity ought to
be made
target
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so
that they can attain
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benefits
of using
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bicycle
and
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keep
themselves fit. Adding to it,
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people
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shell
be made
aware that how they are getting ripped of with the
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use
of expansive cars and bikes for the rides which they can cover through
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bicycle


To recapitulate,
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bicycle
are
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very
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cheap
to travel and key to stay fit on the same
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time
. We cannot neglect the fact that modern
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means
of
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transportation
are quick and comfortable
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but
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lets
not forget the unique
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benefits
of using
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bicycle
.
Hence
, possible
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journey&
#039; s should
be made
through
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10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
54Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS essay Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
366 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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