In recent years, it can be discerned that crime rates have increased dramatically across the globe. Many people argue that there is no solution to this pressing problem. In my opinion the aforementioned statement is completely preposterous and various methods can be used to combat crimes.
To begin with, certain demographics of society believe that with ever increasing offense rate the law system has become exhausted and hope of justice is nil. The reason behind this ideology is the fact that a large number of crimes go unnoticed. With the advancement of technology offences like cyber abuse and hacking has become highly prevalent and is often committed by juvenile individuals. The law against such offenses haven’t been established strongly till date. Furthermore, law system has a large number of loopholes due to the presence of corrupted individuals in the higher positions who use bribery to close down cases. Corruption at work places is another punishable offense which doesn’t receive sufficient penalty. As a result, often times justice is not prevailed, especially when it involves a powerful and influential offender.
On the other hand, it cannot be disputed that with increased offense rates new and better methods to eradicate crimes have also been developed. For instance, drivers who fail to abide by the traffic rules are penalized monetarily, this urges people to follow the regulations strictly. Government workers and lawmakers of our nation are the key players in tackling this matter. They can begin by introducing unbendable anti-corruption laws. A long-term approach can be utilized by educating children and general population regarding the adverse effects of crimes towards the society and the serious consequences faced by the offender.
In conclusion, indeed crime is an issue that needs urgent attention. United effort and adequate public education is an absolute imperative to handle this issue.
In recent years, it can
be discerned
that
crime
rates have increased
dramatically
across the globe.
Many
people
argue that there is no solution to this pressing problem. In my opinion the aforementioned statement is completely preposterous and various methods can be
used
to combat crimes.
To
begin
with, certain demographics of society believe that with
ever increasing
offense
rate the
law
system has become exhausted and hope of justice is nil. The reason behind this ideology is the fact that
a large number of
crimes
go unnoticed. With the advancement of technology
offences
like cyber abuse and hacking has become
highly
prevalent and is
often
committed by juvenile individuals. The
law
against such
offenses
haven’t
been established
strongly
till date.
Furthermore
,
law
system has
a large number of
loopholes due to the presence of corrupted individuals in the higher positions who
use
bribery to close down cases. Corruption at work places is another punishable
offense
which doesn’t receive sufficient penalty.
As a result
,
often
times justice is not prevailed,
especially
when it involves a powerful and influential offender.
On the other hand
, it cannot
be disputed
that with increased
offense
rates new and better methods to eradicate
crimes
have
also
been developed
.
For instance
, drivers who fail to abide by the traffic
rules
are penalized
monetarily
, this urges
people
to follow the regulations
strictly
.
Government
workers and lawmakers of our nation are the key players in tackling this matter. They can
begin
by introducing
unbendable
anti-corruption
laws
. A long-term approach can
be utilized
by educating children and general population regarding the adverse effects of
crimes
towards the society and the serious consequences faced by the offender.
In conclusion
,
indeed
crime
is an issue that needs urgent attention. United effort and adequate public education is an absolute imperative to handle this issue.
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