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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development? v.1

Globalization and tourism are increasingly changing the products dynamics in terms of proximity in the world. You can get your essentials and necessities even though you travel farthest corners in the world. In this essay we will discuss why some people think that it’s a positive development and some people don’t. The accessibility of different resources makes a person to be more comfortable while travelling or moving to a foreign country. Some people believe that only certain brand of products and items only suit them the most that is why they have to stick to certain choices. For example certain medicines are so important for survival of the individual like blood pressure or diabetes medicine which is required on a daily basis. Also another example could be the availability of a certain brand of wheat four for making flat bread is very essential as a certain brand seems to be suitable for digestion to so many Indians in America over another brands. So it is essential that certain products should be should be available all over the world. Some products are best if they are banned in certain countries. If they are likely to cause a threat or addiction, allergy, infection, crop destruction or infestation it is of the best interests of individual or nation that these products are prohibited while entering a foreign countries. Spreading disease and causing mass destruction could pose threat to the health of generations of people and could cause food shortage also. It could spoil the crops in different cities too. For example, there are certain herbs which destroy crops & there are certain drugs like Marijuana which could helps in relaxation but it is banned in some countries as it is illegal to use due to its addiction. These can hamper the health of the individual & few medicines that can affect other individuals through skin infection. It could spread as communicable diseases too. Therefore banning some products could save the citizens and nation as a whole. Availability of products in non-native countries could be positive at the same time negative too. This essay discussed why it is beneficial and non-beneficial and why few products should be made available and why few things should be rejected before their entry in different countries. We looked at some of the opinion from different people and gave out reasoning behind them.
Globalization and tourism are
increasingly
changing the
products
dynamics in terms of proximity in the world. You can
get
your essentials and necessities
even though
you travel
farthest
corners in the world. In this essay we will discuss why
some
people
think
that it’s a
positive
development and
some
people
don’t.

The accessibility of
different
resources
makes
a person to be more comfortable while travelling or moving to a foreign
country
.
Some
people
believe that
only
certain
brand
of
products
and items
only
suit them the most
that is
why they
have to
stick to
certain
choices.
For example
certain
medicines are
so
important
for survival of the
individual
like blood pressure or diabetes medicine which
is required
on a daily basis.
Also
another example could be the availability of a
certain
brand
of wheat four for making flat bread is
very
essential as a
certain
brand
seems to be suitable for digestion to
so
many
Indians in America over another
brands
.
So
it is essential that
certain
products
should be should be
available all over the world.

Some
products
are best if they
are banned
in
certain
countries
. If they are likely to cause a threat or addiction, allergy, infection, crop destruction or infestation it is of the best interests of
individual
or nation that these
products
are prohibited
while entering a foreign
countries
. Spreading disease and causing mass destruction could pose threat to the health of generations of
people
and could cause food shortage
also
. It could spoil the crops in
different
cities too.
For example
, there are
certain
herbs which
destroy
crops & there are
certain
drugs like Marijuana which could
helps
in relaxation
but
it
is banned
in
some
countries
as it is illegal to
use
due to its addiction. These can hamper the health of the
individual
& few medicines that can affect other
individuals
through skin infection. It could spread as communicable diseases too.
Therefore
banning
some
products
could save the citizens and nation as a whole.

Availability of
products
in non-native
countries
could be
positive
at the same time
negative
too. This essay discussed why it is beneficial and non-beneficial and why few
products
should
be made
available and why few things should
be rejected
before
their entry in
different
countries
. We looked at
some of the
opinion from
different
people
and gave out reasoning behind them.
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IELTS essay Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products anywhere in the world. Do you think that this is a positive development or a negative development? Do you think this is a positive development or a negative development?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
394 words
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