The world is becoming similar to a little village where anyone is able to buy a certain product from whichever place on the globe with few mouse clicks on a computer. This has made everything easier and less time consuming while people seem to be always busy these days.
International trade has allowed new types of cuisines from other countries to be introduced to the market, such as thai, chinese and mexican food in the UK. It has also made exotic goods readily available in town, meaning that you don’t have to travel all the way to Iran to get a weel woven rug.
It is sometimes argued that the flood of new foreign items has made some communities lose their identity. For example the old-fashioned English breakfast is now replaced with the american cereals, burgers are now more common than fish and chips and lasagnes have made shepherd’s pie almost forgotten. However, the british were never known for cooking well and these can be viewed as an improvement to the food in our fridge.
Globalisation also facilitate exchange of knowledge making it possible to learn about other cultures and explore their past, values, beliefs and aspirations. This understanding has in its core the factors that can bring about peace among nations as violence has always been associated with ignorance and the alienation of other societies.
All in all, strengthening connections among countries is a part of our advancement as a species, therefore, it shouldn’t be taken negatively. 
The world is becoming similar to a  
little
 village where anyone is able to  
buy
 a certain product from whichever place on the globe with few mouse clicks on a computer. This has made everything easier and less  
time consuming
 while  
people
 seem to be always busy these days.
International trade has  
allowed
 new types of cuisines from other countries to  
be introduced
 to the market, such as  
thai
,  
chinese
 and  
mexican
 food in the UK. It has  
also
 made exotic  
goods
  readily
 available in town, meaning that you don’t  
have to
 travel all the way to Iran to  
get
 a  
weel
 woven rug.
It is  
sometimes
 argued that the flood of new foreign items has made  
some
 communities lose their identity.  
For example
 the  
old
-fashioned English breakfast is  
now
 replaced with the  
american
 cereals, burgers are  
now
 more common than fish and chips and  
lasagnes
 have made shepherd’s pie almost forgotten.  
However
, the  
british
 were never known for cooking well and these can  
be viewed
 as an improvement to the food in our fridge. 
Globalisation
  also
 facilitate exchange of knowledge making it possible to learn about other cultures and explore their past, values, beliefs and aspirations. This understanding has in its core the factors that can bring about peace among nations as violence has always  
been associated
 with ignorance and the alienation of other societies.
All in all, strengthening connections among countries is a part of our advancement as a species,  
therefore
, it shouldn’t  
be taken
  negatively
. 
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