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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.426

You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 426
The clothes people wear are like a window into their life. In the first glance, many aspects of a person life and personality can be inferred. Although some people refute this inevitable fact that we can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear, I support it based on the following reasons. First and foremost, if a person is wearing a uniform, we can find out about his or her job. People usually dress in accordance to their occupation and the activities they usually do. Several examples can be given to illustrate what was alluded to above. A cop uniform indicates that a person works for the police corporation. We can identify a nurse with one glance their white uniform and green mask. To sum, although it is not always true and applicable in all scenarios, the first thing one might notice about people’s clothes is their occupation. Second, the clothes show people’s interests. Wearing fashionable clothes indicates that the person is interested to be up-to-date and to follow the new trends. If an individual wears formal clothes, it shows that the person likes official style. Athletes usually are passionate in sports styles and dress in that style. Moreover, if a person dress casually and looks untidy, it can be implied that the person is not discipline and organized. Therefore, the clothes people wear can demonstrate their personality and their interests. Last but not least, people’s style of dressing can tell us whether they are affluent or not. Wearing expensive clothes, jewelry, and a brand watch certainly specifies that the person is rich. On the other hand, a person wearing T-shirt, pant, and a cheap shoe is not mark rich. In order not to overgeneralize what was mentioned above, some rich people, however, prefer to dress casually and simple because they reject vanity. However, the clothes certainly shows people’s social statue. All in all, although some insightful people may reject the statement, I still agree that the clothes people wear can tell us a lot about them. We can learn out about their interest, their occupation, and their social status by looking at the type of clothes they wear.
The
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are like a window into their life. In the
first
glance,
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many
aspects of a
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person
life and personality can
be inferred
. Although
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some
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people
refute this inevitable fact that we can learn a lot about
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people
by the
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clothes
they
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wear
, I support it based on the following reasons.

First
and foremost, if a
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person
is wearing a uniform, we can find out about
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his or her
job.
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People
usually
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dress
in accordance to their occupation and the activities they
usually
do. Several examples can be
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given
to illustrate what
was alluded
to above. A cop uniform indicates that a
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person
works for the police corporation. We can identify a nurse with one glance their white uniform and green mask. To sum, although it is not always true and applicable in all scenarios, the
first
thing one might notice about
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people’s
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clothes
is their occupation.

Second, the
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clothes
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show
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people’s
interests. Wearing fashionable
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clothes
indicates that the
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person
is interested
to be up-to-date and to follow the new trends. If an individual
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wears
formal
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clothes
, it
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shows
that the
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person
likes official
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style
. Athletes
The adverb 'usually' usually goes after the verb 'are'.
usually are
passionate in sports
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styles
and
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dress
in that
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style
.
Moreover
, if a
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person
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dress
casually
and looks untidy, it can
be implied
that the
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person
is not discipline and organized.
Therefore
, the
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clothes
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people
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wear
can demonstrate their personality and their interests.

Last
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but
not least,
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people’s
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style
of dressing can
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tell
us whether they are affluent or not. Wearing expensive
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clothes
, jewelry, and a brand
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watch
certainly
specifies that the
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person
is rich.
On the other hand
, a
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person
wearing T-shirt, pant, and a
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cheap
shoe is not mark rich. In order not to overgeneralize what
was mentioned
above,
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some
rich
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people
,
however
, prefer to
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dress
casually
and simple
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because
they reject vanity.
However
, the
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clothes
certainly
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shows
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people’s
social statue.

All in all, although
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some
insightful
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people
may reject the statement, I
still
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agree
that the
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clothes
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people
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wear
can
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tell
us a lot about them. We can learn out about their interest, their occupation, and their social status by looking at the type of
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clothes
they
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wear
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 426

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
361 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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