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Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them v.2

Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. What measures can be taken to protect them v. 2
Nowaday, to gain a competitive edge, companies have intention to invest more money on advertisement campaigns. This affects significantly on consumers in making decisions about what they buy for daily life. This essay will discuss about the influences of advertisements on customers and give some solutions to protect them from an increase in total of advertisements. To begin with, the habit of buying products of consumers are impacted by communication such as via internet. For example, when customers read some good reviews about a product, they will increase truth on the quality of good and choose to buy it. In addition. to enhance their public image, enterprises usually make the most of product' s features on the advertisement programs to appeal more customers to purchase items. Therefore, an attractive advertisement can change the option of customers in deciding what they buy. However, an increase in the bunch of advertisements which are out of controlled has negative influences on customers, hence, some measures should implemented to protect customers from this issue. Firstly, the governments ought to enact some strict rules to business about advertisements. For instance, the authorities should take action on controlling the content of advertisements by examining and approving carefully before launching them to customers to ensure the information on advertisements are exact. Besides, countries can run some campaigns to evaluate the standard of products in order to make sure that the products are good for habitants' health. In conclusion, it is clearly seen that advertisements made a great impact on customers, at least because people would purchase items are advertised on Television or endorsed by famous people. Nevertheless, some solutions should be carried out to protect consumers from illegal advertisements.
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Nowaday
, to gain a competitive edge,
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companies
have intention to invest more money on
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advertisement
campaigns. This affects
significantly
on consumers in making decisions about what they
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buy
for daily life. This essay will
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discuss about the
influences of
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advertisements
on
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customers
and give
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some
solutions to protect them from an increase in total of advertisements.

To
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begin
with, the habit of buying
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products
of consumers
are impacted
by communication such as via internet.
For example
, when
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customers
read
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some
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good
reviews about a
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product
, they will increase truth on the quality of
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good
and choose to
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buy
it.
In addition
.
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to
enhance their public image, enterprises
usually
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make
the most of
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product&
#039; s features on the
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advertisement
programs to appeal more
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customers
to
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purchase
items.
Therefore
, an attractive
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advertisement
can
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change
the option of
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customers
in deciding what they
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buy
.

However
, an increase in the bunch of
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advertisements
which are out of controlled has
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negative
influences on
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customers
,
hence
,
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some
measures should
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implemented
to protect
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customers
from this issue.
Firstly
, the
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governments
ought to enact
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some
strict
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rules
to business about
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advertisements
.
For instance
, the authorities should take action on controlling the content of
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advertisements
by examining and approving
carefully
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before
launching them to
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customers
to ensure the information on
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advertisements
are exact.
Besides
, countries can run
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
campaigns to evaluate the standard of
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products
in order to
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make
sure that the
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products
are
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good
for
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habitants&
#039; health.

In conclusion
, it is
clearly
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seen
that
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advertisements
made a great impact on
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customers
, at least
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because
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people
would
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purchase
items
are advertised
on Television or endorsed by
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famous
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people
.
Nevertheless
,
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some
solutions should
be carried
out to protect consumers from illegal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. What measures can be taken to protect them v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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